Wow!
I read your fanfic and it's really good!
One little thing that I'd like to point out if you don't mind, is that all right is two words like I just wrote not 'alright'. I hope you don't mind me pointing that out. I'm just really picky about grammer stuff.
And I have a fanfic I'd like people to read. I don't know how to make a link to it like Ororuthiel did, so I'll just tell you where it is. It's in the fan section of this site. I have two stories "Mirkwood Tales: Sheep Without a Shepherd" and "With or Without I will go". Both are with my own characters in Tolkien settings. "Mirkwood Tales" is definately the better of the two. So please read them and tell me what you think!
Maya