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Post subject: my poem  Posted: December 31st, 2005, 1:11 pm |
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Joined: 14 June 2005
Posts: 1181
Location: Obessing about NCIS and House,M.D.
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OK here is one I just made up.
One ring...it can change
the way people
think about
a
small little thing
This ring
can change
the way
the world runs
_________________ The Quiet A-U Gentlewomen
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2006, 1:34 am |
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Joined: 26 October 2005
Posts: 5410
Location: Why? You a stalker?
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Gender: Female
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Short, but to the point. Good job!!! ^_^
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Siggy set made by the amazing Lembas!
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Post subject: Posted: January 9th, 2006, 9:21 pm |
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not bad...I think if you added more it would be REALLY good. It's good ,but could be better
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