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Post subject: Persia, a poem  Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 12:26 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
Posts: 5272
Location: Texas
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Star rise over
Great King's lands
Lord of Asia
King of Persia
Persia has now passed
under Muslim tide
The Sassanids
The Achaemenids
Lost to time
Lost to memory
Yet still in Persia
the stars will shine
As they did
over the old Empire
Over ol' citys
capitals of lore
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 12:28 pm |
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Joined: 15 March 2006
Posts: 4107
Location: The Square! LOL!
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Cool, didn't understand it but, it was cool...
_________________ <center> 
I saw you look away
Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing?
(I saw you run) I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing?
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 1:53 pm |
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Joined: 07 June 2005
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Location: Texas
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takes a bit of history know how, Sassanid's and Achaemenid's were the two dynastys of Persia, which was conquered by the Muslims in the Sassanid period.
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 2:38 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005
Posts: 2671
Location: the Netherlands
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I like it. Good job, Witch King! (I call a poem good, when I can close my eyes and see it.)
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Post subject: Posted: April 25th, 2006, 7:35 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005
Posts: 4599
Location: Zeh Shire
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Wow, I agree with Cuilwen, you can reall see it! Great job!
_________________ <center> 
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