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Post subject: my little poetry outlet  Posted: December 31st, 2005, 12:37 pm |
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i usually put this stuff in the nazgu club, but now im going to use the proper forum, ill post poetry here every few days, heres one to start
On an endless night
All hope fades away
On an endless night
All light fails
But on an endless night
Light breaks through
But on an endless night
Hope rides home
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Post subject: Posted: January 1st, 2006, 11:32 pm |
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heres another piece related to Narnia
The green fields blossom
in and endless Spring
the great trees thrive
the flowers bloom
but on a day
sad to all
White winter came
and frost crept in
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Post subject: Posted: January 2nd, 2006, 9:33 pm |
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good the only problem is that I don't really see it. I feel a little like it's mounful. Is that what you were going for. 'Cause in the book they made Narnia sound beautiful.
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Post subject: Posted: January 2nd, 2006, 10:10 pm |
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im going for mournful, im trying to get across the sadness of the people of Narnia , not what Narnia looks like
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Post subject: Posted: January 11th, 2006, 11:25 pm |
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heres a new little thing that i think a person in Narnia would thin kup
Why must flowers
In winter die?
Why must trees
in great fost fade?
Why must grass,
Once so green
turn to brown
why must winter
cruelest of colds
come each year
a blight upon the days
Why must christmas
greatest of days
Come to not
on darkest of day
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2006, 2:49 pm |
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wow....
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Post subject: Posted: January 12th, 2006, 9:25 pm |
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thanks, i can't really compare to some other people though 
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Post subject: Posted: January 13th, 2006, 11:33 am |
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*smiles*
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Post subject: Posted: January 14th, 2006, 12:48 am |
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*looks at smile and speculates what it means*
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:12 pm |
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It's a good smile...
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:26 pm |
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just making sure 
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Post subject: Posted: January 15th, 2006, 1:37 pm |
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Don't worry, I'm not the one to make a fake smile...
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:02 pm |
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heres another poem produced by listening to a song....
Oh old memorys
years ever fleeting
Oh why do you
have to turn to ash
Oh why must the world
come to not
Oh I how i wish
to relive past summers
Oh why must it be
mans dark fate
to forever long
for days gone past
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:28 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Post subject: Posted: January 24th, 2006, 7:31 pm |
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*sigh* all these poems are mournful, I need to listen to some positive songs...(and thanks)
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Post subject: Posted: January 25th, 2006, 11:40 am |
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 It's okay, you should see the newer-ish poem I wrote...
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