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Author:  LaylaEvenstar [ January 30th, 2006, 7:19 pm ]
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One of my latest poems :timid:

I once saw the light
But I didn’t have the chance
To walk into it without a fight.
Then someone called my name,
A voice that always was the same.
It was you my love,
That saved me that dark day.
You took me back from the light,
Took me back and held me tight.
You told me it wasn’t time,
That it wasn’t time to die.
Then you kissed my forhead
And told me thoose three words.
I love you, more then anything on this earth.
I started to cry and you touched my cheek,
Touched my cheek and said;
Everything will be ok, in the future a life
Without this awaits, you just need to wait.
Four year has no past sence that dark day.
And you my love isn’t longer here to
Tell me that everything will be ok.
You took the knife, that I gave you once in my life.
Then you made the choice to end it like me,
End it so that you would no longer be.
I remember the blood, tears and pain.
But most of all my love I remember,
When you took that away.
Lying in the bed and holding my hand.
And then you told me thoose three words.
I love you, more then anything on this earth.
Then you falled asleep and never came back.
Many people hate me for letting you go…
They don’t understand, don’t understand why.
You made that choice for a reason and had no regrets.
Now it’s my time to tell you thoose three words,
I love you, more then anything on this earth.

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:18 pm ]
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superb! I really think a lot of people on this site are gifted poets

Author:  LaylaEvenstar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:20 pm ]
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Aww, thank you -hugs-

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:25 pm ]
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:-) thanks, I wish I could write like that

Author:  LaylaEvenstar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:34 pm ]
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Everyone has it in them, you just have to find it hun :happy:

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:36 pm ]
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Oh, I've found a small vestige of it, I just can't hold an emotion long enough to write long poems.

Author:  LaylaEvenstar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:40 pm ]
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Well, I write short most of the times...And sometimes they turn out long ^^

Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 30th, 2006, 9:45 pm ]
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if i wrote long it would sound forced :-p

Author:  Shadowstorm [ January 31st, 2006, 12:12 pm ]
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Sounds nice, it's nice to know that you're a poet as well!

Author:  LaylaEvenstar [ February 4th, 2006, 11:05 am ]
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Thank you shadow ^^ Yes, I am many things :P

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