that is a good quistion but i think i wil maid it al up i like it better that way ore else i have to follow the books and that i dont like so much the books are good but i like to make it more my way
bye greets Di
and today i wil post part II
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| Author: | DiamondNorthTook [ February 4th, 2006, 5:05 pm ] |
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hi all i have here my newest storie that i would like to share with you all its part one of my Took Family series i hope that you like it and tel me what you think of it i wil try to post it all next week bye greets Di Since the day Pippin took was born there were four hobbits who cared for him the most the first was of course his mother Eglantine the second was his father who was very proud to have a son now and the third was his 5 year older sister Pervinca when she was able to come and see to her little brother the first moment there eyes met Pervinca felt a huge source of love for her little baby brother. And the fourth was his cousin Merry Brandybuck who was glad to have a little baby cousin now to teach him al the tricks and plans in later years to come he had learned from Frodo And in later years it was always Pervinca who stood up for her little brother when Merry was not around when he was in trouble ore was been teased by the older lads ore cousins older then him. His other two sisters Pimpernel and Pearl were of course always helping him but that was not the same as the friendship that Pippin had with his sister Vinca. He loved her most next to is mother and his cousin Merry of course who was his best friend. The family Took was living on a farm in the little village Whitwell so it was always early out bed and fed the animals and fetch the eggs from the chickens that was always up to Pippin and Vinca And Today it was a special day for Pippin and the rest of the Took family because Merry Pippin’s favourites cousin was staying over for two whole weeks he was coming after second breakfast so Pippin and Vinca had done there chorus very quick and were done within 10 minutes |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 4th, 2006, 6:34 pm ] |
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Nice. Is it following along with the actual any actual happenings in LOTR or you make it all up? |
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| Author: | DiamondNorthTook [ February 6th, 2006, 1:28 am ] |
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that is a good quistion but i think i wil maid it al up i like it better that way ore else i have to follow the books and that i dont like so much the books are good but i like to make it more my way bye greets Di
and today i wil post part II |
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| Author: | DiamondNorthTook [ February 6th, 2006, 1:02 pm ] |
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Part II After they were done with there chorus Pippin and Pervinca raced back inside the smial to dress in more decent clothes for there visitors due to arrive soon Pippin was very happy to see his cousin again the last time he saw him was already two months ago and in Pippin's mind way to long After dressed in better clothes Pippin went back outside again and walked to a fench close to the paddock of the ponys that were grazing near by and the road He sat there for awhile looking at all the passangers that were coming his way but everytime he thought to see the familar carriage of Merry and his parents it was someone else instead. But then finally he could hear the voice of Merry talking to his mother he jumps from the fench and runs as quikly his legs could carry him to Merry and the carriage that was coming its way to him yelling while running Merry Merry yeah you are here he said and when he was close to the carriage Merry jumps out and together they embraced eachoter before Pippin went to say hello to his aunt and uncle The two cousins jumps back into the carriage and Saradoc Merry''s father clicks with his tounge and the ponys moves fowards again and said so Pippin how are yuo and your family today. i am good uncle and my family is doing good too . that is good news lad and he winked at his nephew Esmeralda smiled at her son and said Merry before you go making mychief again with that rascal cousin of yours first say hello to your cousins and aunt and uncle alright yes mother i will Merry said and grins same as Pippin Soon the carriage makes his way to the farm and the pony stops before the large round door Saradoc helps his wife out of the carriage and are welcomed by Paladin and his wife Eglantine and there three daughter Pearl Pimpernel and Pervinca Hi there Sara how was your yourney Paladin said and Saradoc smiled and said good good not to complain and Eglantine said that is good to hear shal we go back inside now i have some hot cup of tea for us all the nodded and followed her inside the living room Merry greets his nieces quikly before he disapeared again with his cousin hi there Pearl Pimpernel Pervinca nice seening you again bye and he grins and before the three lasses had any change to say anything he runs way very fast togehter with Pippin close behind him |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 6th, 2006, 2:20 pm ] |
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Yeah, I know what you mean. I like ot make everything up on Fan-fic as well. It's more funt that way. Nice second part! |
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| Author: | DiamondNorthTook [ February 6th, 2006, 2:45 pm ] |
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i am glad that you liked it tomorow i wil post part III and some quistions for you if i may ask what is your real name and your age my name is Brenda and i am 20 years old bye greets Di
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 6th, 2006, 2:48 pm ] |
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Real name is Jason. Age 16. Will be 17 in March. |
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| Author: | DiamondNorthTook [ February 12th, 2006, 7:03 am ] |
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thx for telling ok up to part III 
Part III Pippin and Merry slowed down running as soon they were as far as they could get from Pippin's three sisters because if they had stayed Pimpernel Pippin's second oldest sister had a huge crush on Merry and did everything to be close to him when Merry visit with his family Phew Pip that was close Merry said and he let himself down on the gras and lay down and closed his eyes yea say that cousin Pippin said and he grins believe me if we had stayed a minute longer Pimpernel had followed us all the way here Merry opens his eyes again and looked at him so Pip tell me any news other then that your sister stil is deeply in love with me no nothing much the usual as always thought so and any plans to do today no not yet .You Mer? uhm no not me shal we stay here for awhile its lovely weather to do nothing and here we are safe from your sisters and he laughed . yes fine with me |
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