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| Author: | Aduial [ February 14th, 2006, 2:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Many That Live |
'Twas inspired by Gandalf's words to Frodo about Gollum... Many that live deserve death Many that die deserve life Many that scoff deserve to mourn Peace is deserved where there is strife Can you give what they deserve? Even the wisest cannot see the end. To deal out death and call it justice is to make death, not justice, friend What do you think? Should I make a banner for it? |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ February 14th, 2006, 4:04 pm ] |
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Very nice! I like it. I had to read it through a second time to get the rythm down but that is just because I am not used to reading that styl much. It was good. And I htink macking a banner for it would be a very interesting idea. I would be interested to see how it turned out. 
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| Author: | Ororuthiel [ February 18th, 2006, 11:11 am ] |
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It's nice, good job! |
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 18th, 2006, 11:52 am ] |
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good, it just doesn't flow well for me, but I'll read it again and try |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ February 20th, 2006, 11:58 am ] |
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I really liked it. What Gandalf tells Frodo about Gollum is like 1 of my favorite parts in bot the books & the movies. I just think the line's so cool. So i say definately make a banner for it!!! I loved it!!  (& i'd luv 2 see how it turned out)
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| Author: | Existential Genius [ February 20th, 2006, 9:13 pm ] |
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Short and sweet. I like it. Though, it does sound as if it is not quite finished, like there is more to come. You might want to work on that. I think it would a nice banner! Peace Out, Tasare |
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ March 3rd, 2006, 8:56 pm ] |
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If you could make it flow just a tiny bit more it would be perfect!! I really like it though, good job.
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| Author: | FRODOFAN [ March 9th, 2006, 2:51 pm ] |
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I love it. Nice to see another LotR inspired peace. I think you did very well with it. Keep it up and write more.  lol.
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