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Author: | Eldalie [ February 14th, 2006, 7:40 pm ] |
Post subject: | ~Witness of My Dreams~ - - a poem |
Once i had a dream , u know , some ppls think i'm mad with these belives in Elves or Tolkien's world ![]() ![]() ![]() love to here ur ideas! "Witness of My Dreams" In Valinor , up in Elerrina’s* green From above I stare down at Middle-Earth There by the wind I honor the World beneath With a breath I feel my home of Birth. ~Home, home of the love inside me ~Home of my eternal Soul ~I’m going to belive …. O' Nénar , O' Soronúmë , my Elven stars Back to my world , Elvenhome I Returned With tears in eyes I touch grass and the leaves Enchanted by the magic being Reburned. ~Being, being of the Eldar ~Being of the folkien-Star ~As it was my memories … Singing and dancing by the Lórellin* The leaves on the water , the faces so light Rána* and the Stars covering all over the land And the Valar watching, over the Music bright. ~Music, Music of the Creation of Arda ~Music of Manwë and Aulë and Varda ~All the Ainúr who sang the Song … Then I heard there of Ilúvatar the One “Behold! Go give these witness to those you trust Sing them the song of the Glory of the Elves And make them belive they will never be lost. “ ~Witness is, witness of all your dreams ~Witness is,your fate as it seems ~On the head of Eärendil… Then all the Land stay silent And the Elves end their song I woke with wonder , and my witness Was a Silmarill from the Ages of long. -------------------------------------- *Elerrina: The other name of Taniquethil Highest Mount of Arda *Lórellin: a lake in Aman *Rána: Elvish name for the Moon |
Author: | Jax Nova [ February 15th, 2006, 5:24 pm ] |
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Very nice poem! I liked it alot. It ryms good and it has good imagery. (at least for me) I like the styl as well, not sure if I have ever seen a poem done that way before. |
Author: | Enyalië_Vandarya [ February 16th, 2006, 11:38 pm ] |
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*nods* I agree with Jax. I like the style, and it captures your imagination. |
Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ February 16th, 2006, 11:49 pm ] |
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wonderful stuff, it flows together well! |
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