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| Author: | Curunìr [ March 8th, 2006, 4:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Winter’s Might |
(my second poem) Winter’s Might. Cold are these winter nights Alone we have no rights To life without a fire, we are doomed to freeze upon this cold layer. Snow whips the faces of men, tired eyes, and forbidden ends. Cold snow promises death, frozen glaciers endless depths Pale are the people of this north, but survived trough the winters have they not? Cold dawn embraces life, sunlight’s gift of eternal might Sunlight kills the layer of death, yet so beautiful is the winter’s breath It might whip our faces and freeze us, but forever its beauty it shows us And those dark nights reveal a sight, more beautiful than sun’s light Blessed and cursed are we under thee The great north of winter lights and freeze My heart is heavy as I fall down into this cold death without fire But I rejoice seeing the layer of snow, the bed of death so soft, but cold For I die in beauty’s holds. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 8th, 2006, 2:47 pm ] |
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Nice job:) Liked it. Interesting topic. |
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| Author: | Lady Dark Moon [ March 8th, 2006, 9:08 pm ] |
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it's bittersweet. I like it. |
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