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Author: | Jax Nova [ March 30th, 2006, 3:57 pm ] |
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“Destine to be” Through pain and sorrow, death and fear, Facing one more tomorrow, one more year. A life carved in alone, denying what he is, Leaving the one he’s known, is truly his. Forsaking all feeling, to prevent that fate, Afraid of what fates dealing, and that strain will be to great. But in the needy time, emerging true and strong, To deny the ancestral crime, that he’s feared for so long. Take the life and take the sword, Make the land your own my lord. Fight the one who sets on high, Fire flowing from his eye. in your might despise his will, Let him know you’re living still. So the ring may be destroyed, And your judgment be employed. With the one your meant to love, Sent from spirits up above. Now in night he can see, All this was destine to be. A poem I wrote about the Return of the king mostly. ![]() |
Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 30th, 2006, 7:36 pm ] |
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awww *huggles Jax* you're such a good writer!! |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 3:28 pm ] |
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*hugs mom back* Thanks. ![]() |
Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 31st, 2006, 3:29 pm ] |
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*smiles* you talented little boy!! mommy raised you well!! ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 3:32 pm ] |
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Yes you did. ![]() I am planing ot get a book of poetry published maybe sometime this year if I can rais the money! |
Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 31st, 2006, 3:33 pm ] |
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ooo how nice!! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 31st, 2006, 3:34 pm ] |
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good poetry, but just to nitpick, you spelled destiny wrong |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 3:37 pm ] |
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Thanks. lol that's alright. Since I stink so bad at spelling I welcome people's corections. *thinks* I did put it through a spell check. *shrugs* |
Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 31st, 2006, 3:49 pm ] |
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awww you dont stink at spelling hun!! *hugs Jax* ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 4:07 pm ] |
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Haldir o Lórien wrote: ooo how nice!!
![]() ![]() I am not sure where it would sell but it could be got online on Amazon.com the way I understand it. *shrugs* I will know more when I actually start the process. lol I don't spell good. |
Author: | Aredhel Ar-Feiniel [ March 31st, 2006, 4:25 pm ] |
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good luck with your book! you can spell good when you try, dear ![]() |
Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 31st, 2006, 4:25 pm ] |
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the spell check program probably thought you ment like the word "destined" except minus the past tense "-ed" |
Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 5:36 pm ] |
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oh, yeah. lol sorry about that. Thanks for pointing it out though. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ April 4th, 2006, 4:59 pm ] |
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hey, a new one!!! lol i like it. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ April 5th, 2006, 7:16 pm ] |
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Thanks. ![]() Well.... I just finished the book the other day. ![]() And now it has to be edited, corected etc.... Then the publishing process I think can take up to 6 months... so it will probably be a while. But I will let everyone know when I get it published. ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ April 6th, 2006, 5:23 pm ] |
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definately (ya, i totally spelled that wrong....) |
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