Great job!
I like that one a lot.
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ March 31st, 2006, 3:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | My cold soul, a poem |
My soul is cold warm fires gone I lie in my bed weary eyes shut My memories bring back suffering again I'm tired of lies sick with deceit So I lie in my room, ingnoring the loud knocks My mind slowly drifting into uneasy sleep All peace gone soul still cold |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ March 31st, 2006, 4:10 pm ] |
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Great job! I like that one a lot.
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| Author: | Eldarwen [ April 1st, 2006, 4:35 am ] |
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Very very good, and deep. Sounds cinda like a poem I wrote once. |
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