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 Post subject: Searching (neither a Poem, nor a FF^^)
PostPosted: April 3rd, 2006, 5:20 pm 


Searching
Agitated she ran ....
not realising what she was really doing.
Her thoughts were mixed up,
she was confused and she didn't know why.
Her only assurance:
She searched something....
But who?
Or what?
And why?
Where?
She couldn't remember anything.

Was she meant to stray around between the border of insanity and existince for her whole lifetime?
Was she predetermined to do anything at all?
She saw so many things
but she didn't knew it's name.
She was searching.
And even though she saw so many things, so many people,
somehow she knew that this wasn't what she was searching for.

Straying around,
helpless,
without any ambition.
She didn't realize
that what she was searching was so simple.
So easy to find,
and not far away

Looking around,
tears in her swollen eyes,
she finally found it.

Standing in front of a mirror she finally realized,
that what she was searching was so simple,
so easy to find
and not far away .
Standing in front of a mirror she found it at last.
She found herself........


well... it seems unfinished to me.... somethings missing.
well... do you thing it's okay?


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PostPosted: April 4th, 2006, 2:33 pm 
Warden of the Knight
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Nice job:) I did one of those once.... @_@ I am not sure what you call them. lol

But I liked it:)

It seems, to answer your question, something that could be continued but wouldn't need to be.

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PostPosted: April 4th, 2006, 4:45 pm 


thanks for your comment!!! :)


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PostPosted: April 4th, 2006, 4:49 pm 
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Wow that's beautiful, LĂșthien! :bounce:


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