Thank you Jax. As I told you before if it rymes completly it all goes downhill for me but ... I wrote at 3 o'clock in the morning so it sorta wrote its self. I have another one with the same subject line as it too
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ April 8th, 2006, 11:05 am ] |
| Post subject: | Sickness ( a poem by Leaha) |
This is a poem about a girl who has AIDS hope you like it. I wrote it in the wee hours of the morning. Sickness She was flying high With nothing to hold her back Daring to break away from expectations And pulling towards her dreams She wanted to be a princess A mermaid A mother But even the simplest she could not be She had always thought it could help her Now it was making her sick No longer able tosee her beloved cities With the smog Ang its fog And the sick No longer able to do normal things She left these to two others And with one final call She had realized Her one last dream come true She was a mother But to no avail We are all set to end And now her time had come . |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 8th, 2006, 11:53 am ] |
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That's nice:) Interesting subject. |
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| Author: | Envied Alexander [ April 8th, 2006, 12:39 pm ] |
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well that was sad. |
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ April 8th, 2006, 1:19 pm ] |
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Thank you Jax. As I told you before if it rymes completly it all goes downhill for me but ... I wrote at 3 o'clock in the morning so it sorta wrote its self. I have another one with the same subject line as it too
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 8th, 2006, 4:09 pm ] |
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 You should pst it. Yeah your right sis it is kinda sad... but still nice. I write some kind of sad about people dying sometimes...
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ April 9th, 2006, 3:01 am ] |
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I wrote it because I was reading this story about a girl who when she got AIDS she got pregenant and shortly after wards she died . So thats where this comes from |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 10th, 2006, 11:27 am ] |
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I see. Yeah that's sad. Sorry for short posts pressed for time and gota go see ya! *waves* |
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ June 11th, 2006, 12:20 am ] |
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Ha ! more people need to see my sad sad poem so go to the top with you |
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