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 Post subject: "fade with the years" a poem of pain
PostPosted: June 7th, 2006, 3:04 pm 
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I calm my fears,
but I turn to tears,
hoping that the pain will fade with the years,
but for now I calm my fears,
but turn to tears,
with hope it will fade with the years...

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this is the first poem i've put to paper in i good bit of time, it is about a girl, who is riped from all that she knew, from all she has ever known, it is a poem about a girl, who has found her self lost in a world far bigger than her, about a girl, who is scared, and is trying to find her way, but she is trying to do it alone.
~Princess K.

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.


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PostPosted: June 7th, 2006, 3:37 pm 
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Oh, repetiton, good. Not out-standing, no one is that good, but very good.

You spelt hoping wrong by the way!

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I saw you look away
Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing?
(I saw you run) I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing?


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PostPosted: June 7th, 2006, 3:40 pm 
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ahh, i blame the lap top and my bad spelling, i spell better when i'm not usein' the lap top. and i wrote this at about 1 in the morning.... so i'm happy with it!

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.


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PostPosted: June 9th, 2006, 6:30 pm 
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Nice job I thought it was very nice! :)

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good job, nice poem

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PostPosted: June 10th, 2006, 2:44 pm 
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thanks! (this would be a one word post!)

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.


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PostPosted: June 11th, 2006, 12:16 am 
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WEll I like it I am sone to put on new poems on hre. Ones that you have not even heard Kade. ALot of the same subject lines as my one about the girl with AIDS but no AIDS. I love your poem Kade.

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PostPosted: June 11th, 2006, 7:51 pm 
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thanksies Leaha!

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.


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PostPosted: June 14th, 2006, 8:51 am 


*nods and claps* Very good. Short, but the repetion gives it some real punch. Enjoyed reading it lots. :D


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