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Post subject: "Butterfly"  Posted: April 11th, 2006, 6:14 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Ok...... *grins* This is a little weird... but I just felt like writing it so bear with me. *grins once more and hides*
"Butterfly"
I ran to catch the butterfly,
Reaching in the air.
I then wished that I could fly,
It just wasn't fair!
But after a long run,
I caught it again.
And there beneath the sun,
Iheld it tight within.
I felt so tiered after that,
I yawned big and wide.
My hands relaxed where I sat,
And off the thingy flied.
It flew down my throat,
The butterfly I had.
So then I wrote,
How it tasted oh so bad.
But on the way back,
on the hill so high.
My mind began to slack,
And I began to fly.
Now I'm flying through the air,
Like a butterfly.
Happy and without a care,
Like a butterfly.
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Post subject: Posted: April 11th, 2006, 9:05 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
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Location: The Shire
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lol. OK, that's kinds weird. does this come from a personal experience....? lol  it's good, though. kind of odd. 8) _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: April 12th, 2006, 1:46 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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lol no not a personal expirience. Just out of my mind.  And yeah it is kind of weird.
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Post subject: Posted: April 12th, 2006, 3:36 pm |
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Joined: 15 March 2006
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Location: The Square! LOL!
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Wow, like it! Its funny!
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Post subject: Posted: April 12th, 2006, 4:03 pm |
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Joined: 31 December 2005
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Location: Hell.
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i'm kinda confused - it's great... but does he die in the end... probably not... i'm just being morbid!
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Post subject: Posted: April 13th, 2006, 7:09 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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no he does not die. That's ok though I guess it might seem that way a bit huh? Glad you all like it though!
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Post subject: Posted: April 13th, 2006, 10:05 pm |
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I luv ur 1st banner, Ferya Kai!!!! _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 12:10 am |
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Lol, I liked it, Jax!! It was just kind of fun and carefree, which although that is not really your writing style, it was a fun poem. Yes, a little odd, but I enjoyed it.
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 9:08 am |
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No, its not wierd, its brilliant, and clever!
_________________  Faith isn't the ability to believe long and far into the misty future.
It's simply taking God at His Word and taking the next step Joni Erickson Tada
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 9:19 am |
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Joined: 15 March 2006
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Location: The Square! LOL!
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U seem the drama type Jaxx Nova, ure very good at writing....*pouts* wish I was....
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Post subject: Posted: April 22nd, 2006, 2:40 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005
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Location: the Netherlands
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It's a bit weird, but I really like the idea of it.
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Post subject: Posted: April 29th, 2006, 6:17 pm |
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Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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~*ArwenEvenstar*~ wrote: Lol, I liked it, Jax!! It was just kind of fun and carefree, which although that is not really your writing style, it was a fun poem. Yes, a little odd, but I enjoyed it. No it's not really my writing style but things like that just pop into my minde at random some times every now and then. So... I write them down. Lady Raine of the Rangers wrote: No, its not wierd, its brilliant, and clever! lol thanks. Skandar Luver wrote: U seem the drama type Jaxx Nova, ure very good at writing....*pouts* wish I was.... Well, depends on what you mean by Drama to be honest I am not sure what Drama realy is. *pouts* sorry. But I am glad you liked it. And as far as that goes I think with practice pretty much anyone could write good poetry honestly. Cuilwen wrote: It's a bit weird, but I really like the idea of it.
Glad you liked it.
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