lol. OK, that's kinds weird. does this come from a personal experience....? lol
it's good, though. kind of odd. 8)
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 11th, 2006, 6:14 pm ] |
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Ok...... *grins* This is a little weird... but I just felt like writing it so bear with me. *grins once more and hides* "Butterfly" I ran to catch the butterfly, Reaching in the air. I then wished that I could fly, It just wasn't fair! But after a long run, I caught it again. And there beneath the sun, Iheld it tight within. I felt so tiered after that, I yawned big and wide. My hands relaxed where I sat, And off the thingy flied. It flew down my throat, The butterfly I had. So then I wrote, How it tasted oh so bad. But on the way back, on the hill so high. My mind began to slack, And I began to fly. Now I'm flying through the air, Like a butterfly. Happy and without a care, Like a butterfly. |
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ April 11th, 2006, 9:05 pm ] |
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lol. OK, that's kinds weird. does this come from a personal experience....? lol it's good, though. kind of odd. 8)
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 12th, 2006, 1:46 pm ] |
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lol no not a personal expirience. Just out of my mind.  And yeah it is kind of weird.
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| Author: | BlackRose_Valentine [ April 12th, 2006, 3:36 pm ] |
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Wow, like it! Its funny! |
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| Author: | WML is Broken__* [ April 12th, 2006, 4:03 pm ] |
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i'm kinda confused - it's great... but does he die in the end... probably not... i'm just being morbid! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 13th, 2006, 7:09 pm ] |
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no he does not die. That's ok though I guess it might seem that way a bit huh? Glad you all like it though!
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ April 13th, 2006, 10:05 pm ] |
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I luv ur 1st banner, Ferya Kai!!!!
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| Author: | ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ April 22nd, 2006, 12:10 am ] |
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Lol, I liked it, Jax!! It was just kind of fun and carefree, which although that is not really your writing style, it was a fun poem. Yes, a little odd, but I enjoyed it.
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| Author: | Ashwise [ April 22nd, 2006, 9:08 am ] |
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No, its not wierd, its brilliant, and clever! |
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| Author: | BlackRose_Valentine [ April 22nd, 2006, 9:19 am ] |
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U seem the drama type Jaxx Nova, ure very good at writing....*pouts* wish I was.... |
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| Author: | Cuilwen [ April 22nd, 2006, 2:40 pm ] |
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It's a bit weird, but I really like the idea of it. |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ April 29th, 2006, 6:17 pm ] |
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~*ArwenEvenstar*~ wrote: Lol, I liked it, Jax!! It was just kind of fun and carefree, which although that is not really your writing style, it was a fun poem. Yes, a little odd, but I enjoyed it. No it's not really my writing style but things like that just pop into my minde at random some times every now and then. So... I write them down. Lady Raine of the Rangers wrote: No, its not wierd, its brilliant, and clever! lol thanks. Skandar Luver wrote: U seem the drama type Jaxx Nova, ure very good at writing....*pouts* wish I was.... Well, depends on what you mean by Drama to be honest I am not sure what Drama realy is. *pouts* sorry. But I am glad you liked it. And as far as that goes I think with practice pretty much anyone could write good poetry honestly. Cuilwen wrote: It's a bit weird, but I really like the idea of it.
Glad you liked it.
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