Wow! That's a lovely poem! I love the imagery that you use! Well done!
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| Author: | Seldrima [ May 27th, 2006, 9:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | "Moments pass" |
[font=palatino linotype]Moments pass Moments pass You see yourself behind the looking glass Though as you watch You feel the earth vanish. Your surroundings blur, Nothing seems to be there, No one wants to know there’s only one place to go, Though you hide his emotion the loneliness takes control, Slowly eating away, Reminding you that this is your way, Waiting ceases as you feel stricken, Alone, in your own thoughts, Walking on trying to find that one person, Who will return the light to your life? Diminishing the night.[/font] |
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| Author: | Lady Elenriel [ May 27th, 2006, 4:54 pm ] |
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Wow! That's a lovely poem! I love the imagery that you use! Well done!
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| Author: | Lady Dark Moon [ May 28th, 2006, 2:09 pm ] |
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I love the wistful air. good job! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ May 29th, 2006, 6:41 pm ] |
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Nice job, very nice. 
I liked the way it flowed. |
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