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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 1st, 2006, 3:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Dare to Fall in Love
OK, this one is........interesting. I was in one of those moods, so i started writing a story......it was gonna be very detailed & everything. but as I started, I realized I could make it into a poem. So, this is what I ended up with.

She stared out the window, as the sky opened up,
and poured with rain.
She watched as it slid down the glass,
and mirrored her own tears on her cheeks.
She wished she were the rain, and could fall down out of the sky,
hit the window,
and fade into the night.
But she could not.
She had tried to sleep,
but sleep would not come.
For every time she closed her eyes,
she saw his face.
It flashed before her again and again,
taunting her,
calling her names.
Daring her to fall in love.
Author:  Lady Elenriel [ June 1st, 2006, 9:52 pm ]
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I love it pip&leggyluvr! I love the imagery you use! Great job! :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 2nd, 2006, 1:03 pm ]
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thanks :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ June 2nd, 2006, 8:57 pm ]
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Ditto. :) Love the imagry as well. very nicely done. :)

Like the subject to it's kinda intrigueing. :)
Author:  Galadriel of Lothlorien [ June 3rd, 2006, 12:54 am ]
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Not bad Pip
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 3rd, 2006, 3:24 pm ]
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thanks guys. :)
ya, imagery is something that I always try to use a lot of.....In writing songs, poems, stories, or whatever. I like for you to be able to imagine & picture what's going on.
Author:  Jax Nova [ June 5th, 2006, 6:40 pm ]
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Yeah same here. :) I like immagry as well. I think it's pretty important to writing.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 6th, 2006, 10:30 am ]
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:yes: ya, I think so, too. 1 of the reasons i luv Tolkien so much!! hehe :-D He's always very descriptive. My Mom says that that bores her. lol But it fascinates me, b/c I think, wow, u know he came up w/ all of this on his own!! That's pretty cool. 8)
Author:  RoboKatie [ June 8th, 2006, 7:26 pm ]
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As everyone else said, the imagery was awesome! It was beautiful--can't wait to read more of your poems!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 9th, 2006, 10:22 am ]
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thanks :-D
I luv ur avvie, by the way. :)
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 4th, 2006, 6:51 pm ]
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Very well done, pip. I love the imagery as well.
Author:  Gilraen Ringeril [ July 4th, 2006, 11:16 pm ]
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That's a beautiful poem pip! :) :) I really like the story and the last line :) It's so sweet! ♥♥♥
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 5th, 2006, 4:23 pm ]
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lol. thanks :-D
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