O r so they say bit at the bottom got on my nerves b4 i finished the poem..so i didn't read it all! Apart from that good
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| Author: | BlackRose_Valentine [ June 2nd, 2006, 5:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | "So they say" My first poem on here. |
Its not very good but I just want to see peoples opinion. Or so they say Life stopped Bombs dropped Life’s changed Or so they say Experience used Minds abused Thoughts fused Or so they say Plans drawn More born New dawn Or so they say Who knows Spirit glows Tears Flow Or so they say Order wrote Democracy broke Who knows? Or so they say News Withdrawn Families torn Try to mourn Or so they say So they say. |
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| Author: | lady_E [ June 2nd, 2006, 7:42 am ] |
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O r so they say bit at the bottom got on my nerves b4 i finished the poem..so i didn't read it all! Apart from that good
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| Author: | Galadriel of Lothlorien [ June 3rd, 2006, 12:58 am ] |
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I LIKED IT! 
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| Author: | BlackRose_Valentine [ June 3rd, 2006, 5:40 am ] |
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Thank-you. I was quite pleased with it. |
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