Ok everybody. I know it sucks and all but i thought i would put it down anyways so here goes. This poem is called Eternity.







Eternity

I lie in bed at night and pray,
that you will think of me.
I cry until my eyelids close,
And dream- eternity



I wake to sunlight on my face,
and for a moment i forget.
Then a cloud passes by,
And i realize this is it.


I carry on through out the day,
feigning joy, and feeling pain.
I long to gaze upon your face,
and share a smile, and embrace.


The day is drawing to an end,
and still i think of you.
I try to relax yet in my mind,
i wonder what to do.


So now i lay me down to sleep,
I pray the lord, My soul will keep.
And should by chance you remember me,
Know that I love you- eternally

So was it horrible or what? Post your comments if you like.

Not horible, infact I liked it! You got good ryming in there. nice job.

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Gee thanks!!!!

i really like it, if i ever get around to writeing this fan fic i've been tossing around, do you think you could help me? as Jax said about the ryming, i can't rhyme, so maybe you could help me out! i really like it! i want to hear more from you!

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<center>“Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations. If you desire glory, you may envy Napoleon, but Napoleon envied Caesar, Caesar envied Alexander, and Alexander, I daresay, envied Hercules, who never existed.”
at one point, I was alejandrah.

Your poem is lovely Kinduali. I agree with Jax-you are very good at rhyming. Great work and keep it up!

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AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!

Thanks ya'll and sure Princess Kade... just let me knnow