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 Post subject: Secrets......the 1st Poem
PostPosted: August 1st, 2006, 3:43 pm 
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This poem I wrote about a month ago....& then i wrote kind of a sequel-type thingy not too long ago....anyway, here it is.

Secrets


Scared and confused,
Full of sorrow and pain.
But she could not tell,
Though she wished she could, in vain.

She wished it would stop;
That all her pain would end.
She wished she could tell
Her family and her friends.

It wasn’t that she was afraid,
That they would tell another person.
It was simply the fact,
The she couldn’t let anyone in.

When asked about her secrets,
She simply would not say.
She always kept them hidden;
She kept them locked away.

She wished that she could tell them;
That she were not afraid.
But she had told before,
And for it, she had paid.

She knew she hurt some feelings,
When she said she wouldn’t say.
In truth, she really wanted to.
She wished for it each day.

But the only one she could trust,
Was God, who’d shown her love and grace.
She hoped that others would understand,
This was a problem, that she just could not face.

So she sat down and wrote this poem,
And hoped that someone wouldn’t think it strange;
That they too had this problem,
And wished that they could change.

And after she finished,
She bowed her head, and prayed.
She begged God for someone,
Who would understand her pain.

She hasn’t met that someone,
Or if in fact, she has,
She has yet to realize it.
But she knows it’s in God’s hands.

She stills prays for the one,
Who will hold her in his arms,
And listen as she tells everything;
Listen to her pour out her heart.

And one day, that someone will come,
Though she’s still waiting for that day.
And he’ll look her in the eye,
And say, “You don’t have to keep things from me, locked away.”

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PostPosted: August 2nd, 2006, 7:20 am 
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That was so sad. *cries* It was wonderful, I love such poems.

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PostPosted: August 3rd, 2006, 1:41 pm 
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aw, thanks. lol i luv sad poems 2....idk y. lol :)

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PostPosted: August 3rd, 2006, 4:58 pm 
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Wow that was awasome!

Not only was it well writen but that is a poem that I can relate to in every line... Honestly that sounds exactily like me.... except the being a girl part obviously.

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PostPosted: August 3rd, 2006, 5:08 pm 
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lol. i'm glad u can realte Jax. I hate being this way, but i just am. *shrugs* it's sumthing i'm working on. :) thanks again 4 the input. glad u like it! :-D

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Yeah, I know what you mean. Kind of like you want to tell but for some reason you just can't make yourself do it.

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PostPosted: August 8th, 2006, 4:22 pm 
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:yes: that's exactly wut it's like. & quite frankly, i hate!! lol it drives me crazy. :-P

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lol yeah I know... me too. But I guess it's just something you have to work through. lol I just wish I knew how!

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PostPosted: August 9th, 2006, 10:47 pm 
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lol. that's exactly how i am!!! lol & i wish i knew how, 2. it can be SO frusturating!! I know EXACTLY how u feel. u know, if u ever need to talk to me, u know i'm here, b/c i know exactly wut ur talking about. lol :-D So, yea, if u ever need to talk, just pm me! :-D

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Wow- that's creepy. It's like you can read my mind. Seriously- word for word, that's EXACTLY how I feel. :) It's really weird how similar we are!! :P You did a great job with it though. :)

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lol. it sounds like u me & jax r more alike than we thought!! lol :) It's a good thing if i'm like u guys though, b/c u guys r nice!! lol Although, idk if u wanna be like me. i can be a little weird.........lol :)

& thanks Arwen! i really appreciate that u guys read my poems & let me know wut u think!!! :) :hug:

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lol Don't worry Pip, I have never met somone outside or inside of my family that has spent much time around me and not thought I was weird.

I am a ton different than any6 person I have ever met. I am more like you and Arwen than anyone I know in personaly actually. lol And besides it's not "weird" it's "gifted" :P

And you do a nice job on your poetry, :) just keep it up.

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PostPosted: August 11th, 2006, 8:51 pm 
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gifted. i like that. lol :-D Yes, ppl think that i'm weird as well. I prefer unique, however. lol :-P & we're suppossed to be different. if we werent, then we'd all be the same. & that would just be................well, weird. lol :-p

& thanks! I have u 2 thank 4 my luv of writing poetry!!! :) lol seriously, though. i enver would've if u hadnt encouraged me! so thanks a million, Jax!!! Ur the coolest!! 8) (even if u are a little "gifted." lol :))

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That makes three of us- I'm always considered quite "gifted" as well. I consider it a good thing- like you said, Pip, it would be boring if we were all the same. :) However, it is good to know there are other people out there so much like me, because I've never met anyone I'm more alike to than the two of you. :)

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PostPosted: August 13th, 2006, 4:32 pm 
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*hugs Jax & Arwen* Aw, thankies arwen. we're just 3 gifted, unique ppl!! :-P lol I only wish i could actually meet u guys in person.....:( *sniffle*

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PostPosted: August 13th, 2006, 6:07 pm 
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I know... I do too. :hug: We're all just so much alike!!! :)

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