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A Mere Reflection ~ Poem
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Author:  Galasriniel [ June 9th, 2006, 2:46 pm ]
Post subject:  A Mere Reflection ~ Poem
A Mere Reflection

As I reach the destination
And peer into the shallow depths of tears,
A lost mortal glares back
Her eyes reflecting her sorrowful fears.
Wednesday's child woeful as always
Illuminated water never hiding that fact,
The eerie eventide consuming false hope
Dreams of unreachable places they forever lack.
Mirrored whispers drift in the distance
Nameless being living in eternal winter,
Deep slumber no answer to life's question
But what if all's difficult and freedom is to wither?
Dip my head into the elemental abyss
My replica's appearance I unmistakably tore,
My mere reflection soon to be lifeless
And I shall behold the agonizing grief nevermore.
Author:  Estë Undómë [ June 9th, 2006, 3:20 pm ]
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Wow! I really like that Noc, so deep and powerful. I know this will sound wierd but it reminds me of the wind.
Author:  Larael [ June 9th, 2006, 4:13 pm ]
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I love it, it's very powerful! It reminds me more of someone looking into a mirror...
Author:  Galasriniel [ June 9th, 2006, 4:48 pm ]
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Larael wrote:
It reminds me more of someone looking into a mirror...


Seeing as it's partially about looking at the reflection in the water, I can't blame you ;)
And thank you all for your comments :)
Author:  Estë Undómë [ June 9th, 2006, 4:49 pm ]
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No problems, I like poetry but it really isn't my forte. :no:
Author:  Galasriniel [ June 10th, 2006, 3:27 pm ]
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Elenwë Undómë wrote:
No problems, I like poetry but it really isn't my forte. :no:


I'm just really glad you like it :)
Author:  Raivynn Phoenix [ June 10th, 2006, 4:49 pm ]
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That's fantastic.
:-D
Quite a talent you have there.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ June 11th, 2006, 12:11 am ]
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OMG, this is awesome!! i luv it!!! :)
Author:  Galasriniel [ June 11th, 2006, 7:36 am ]
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Phoenix Invictus wrote:
That's fantastic.
:-D
Quite a talent you have there.


Fankoo :timid:

pip&leggyluvr wrote:
OMG, this is awesome!! i luv it!!! :)


Aw... I'm relieved that everyone seems to like it... :)
Author:  Lady Elenriel [ June 11th, 2006, 1:53 pm ]
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Wow! That's awesome Nocturne! It is so eloquently expressed. I love it! Great job! :-D
Author:  Galasriniel [ June 11th, 2006, 2:47 pm ]
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Elenriel Greenleaf wrote:
Wow! That's awesome Nocturne! It is so eloquently expressed. I love it! Great job! :-D


:hug: Thank you all for the comments!
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