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Author:  Galadriel of Lothlorien [ June 13th, 2006, 7:07 pm ]
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Label This

You don't have to listen
to the rumors and hype,
or let others brand you
with a stereotype.
You don't need the clothes,
or the shows, or the car,
Just beleive in yourself, and be who you are.

You can try hard in school
without being a geek,
'cause there's way more to life
than the popular clique.
Joining the band doesn't make you uncool,
It's those who say otherwise who are the fools.
Join a team, or a club, or try out for the play,
Don't wait any longer, go for it today.

You don't have to be great, just get out there and start.
And whatever you do, let it come from the heart.
Be it music, or writing, or drama, or sports.
Youd don't let anyone ele make you think you fall short.
Author:  Darrell [ June 14th, 2006, 9:02 am ]
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Very good. Deals with a contemporary issue that agravates me so much. So many people seem to be driven by the need to be 'cool'.
However, sometimes, a poem does better when the meter from line to line is more equal, and without rhyme. Sure, have it rhyme if you can make it do so without forcing it and unbalancing the poem. I always prefer poetry that sounds smooth and well oiled than poetry that rhymes.

But yeah, I like that, it's a good read. Good job :)
Author:  lady_E [ June 16th, 2006, 11:35 am ]
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I love that poem..it rox :-D
Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 17th, 2006, 1:26 pm ]
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i really like it, it made me think, "why do i want to look like JoJo so bad?" i should just be me! you rulez!
Author:  Galadriel of Lothlorien [ June 17th, 2006, 3:28 pm ]
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lol.. thanks
Author:  Envied Alexander [ June 17th, 2006, 3:32 pm ]
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sorry 'bout that, i blame the 5 cups of coffee! :D
Author:  Calathiel [ June 18th, 2006, 6:32 am ]
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beautiful! really great! I've been so uncertain about myself for years and it's getting a little better lately, but still I have a major selfconfidence problem. This poem is really good for that!
Author:  Galadriel of Lothlorien [ June 22nd, 2006, 9:45 am ]
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Calathiel wrote:
beautiful! really great! I've been so uncertain about myself for years and it's getting a little better lately, but still I have a major selfconfidence problem. This poem is really good for that!


yeah, I wrote it and dedicated it to one of my friends cuz she was feeling that everyone was staring at her for some reason. She feels a little better.
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