I agree with Jax. The poem is very interesting and I love the way you wrote it. Great job!
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ June 18th, 2006, 11:41 pm ] |
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I came upon a night of silver He had lost his way On his horse of bay I helped him to the town In this town he came down And thanked me for what I did ********* Right then came a kid He asked the knight for help "Oh knight of Delp help" He cried A woman sighed Foe that was her mischvious son I patted my bun and wringed my hands FOr he was the fairest in all of the lands |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ June 26th, 2006, 6:30 pm ] |
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Interesting. Cool subject! |
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ June 26th, 2006, 8:02 pm ] |
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Thank YOu!!!!! |
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| Author: | Lady Elenriel [ June 26th, 2006, 9:52 pm ] |
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I agree with Jax. The poem is very interesting and I love the way you wrote it. Great job!
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| Author: | brego145 [ June 26th, 2006, 10:22 pm ] |
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Very cute short peom.Very interesting indeed. I love it. |
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| Author: | Kit-Kat [ July 1st, 2006, 4:46 pm ] |
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short to the point and it's kinda catchy |
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| Author: | Envied Alexander [ July 3rd, 2006, 5:19 pm ] |
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well, what can i say? it was to short for my tastes. Leaha, you should work on making your poems longer, not just joting down three lines, i KNOW that you can do better than that! |
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| Author: | Annabel Lee [ July 6th, 2006, 3:48 am ] |
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How Do Ya like me now !!!! |
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