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Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ June 27th, 2006, 6:01 pm ] |
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OK, this poems....alright. I had a little trouble w/ the ending.....maybe one will pop in my head sumtime. *shrugs* idk, but anyway, here's wut it is now. Hope u like it!! ![]() Water It falls from the sky, And floats down streams. We drink and bathe in it each day. We spray it at each other, And swim in it for fun. In it, we laugh, and we play. It slips down our cheeks, When we’re overjoyed, And also when we’re filled with sad. It flows down from waterfalls, And streams, and things, And makes things not seem so bad. Sometimes it’s frozen, Sometimes it’s liquid, And sometimes it’s in between. It’s the most beautiful thing, Of all God’s creations. It’s always wonderful and clean. It’s an amazing gift, Sent from above, And as symbolic as can be. God used it to rain For 40 nights and days, And flooded the world with the sea. But most important of all, Is Jesus Christ our Lord, Who saved us from the devil’s strife. Jesus used the symbol of water, To wash away our sins, And give to God his life. It falls from the sky, And floats down streams. We drink and bathe in it each day. We spray it at each other, And swim in it for fun. In it, we laugh, and we play. So take the time, To slow down, And thank the Lord and applaud. For you see, water is simply, A perfect reflection, Of our perfect God. |
Author: | Lady Elenriel [ June 27th, 2006, 8:45 pm ] |
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That's a lovely poem pip&leggyluvr. I love how you talk about the different forms of water and I really love the end-it helps to tie everything together. Great job! ![]() |
Author: | Fíriel_18190 [ June 28th, 2006, 5:48 am ] |
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^ yes I agree. It's a very good poem and the colour of the text also fits to it very well. |
Author: | Jax Nova [ June 28th, 2006, 6:28 pm ] |
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Lovely. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ June 30th, 2006, 5:27 pm ] |
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Thanks guys!! Fíriel_18190 wrote: It's a very good poem and the colour of the text also fits to it very well.
That's funny, b/c I really did do that on purpose, but I didn't think any1 would notice......lol ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Jax Nova [ July 3rd, 2006, 8:31 pm ] |
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lol ![]() |
Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ July 4th, 2006, 1:15 pm ] |
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