what a beautiful description. I could really imagine it all. Good job.
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| Author: | lady_E [ June 30th, 2006, 9:09 am ] |
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On a warm sunny Evening in middle of June. Sam, Rosie, Elanor and their youngest child Frodo went on a walk into the forest. The Sky was blue, the green grass was lovelyed coloured (As it was a very late evening and the sunset had just begun). Everywhere Elanor went there were little butterflies flittering up and down on each and every flower in the forest. She followed the beautiful butterflies, until she cam to a little stream. The stream has a little waterfall, that had water trickling down down down the long stream. There were many little wild flowes happily swaying in the wind on the edge of the stream. They were of many colours. But most of them were yellow and white, they looked a bit like daisys but the weren't as small or as pretty as daisys. They were nicer. Each one had their petals folded backward and their yellow colours were bright and the white was a little lighter. Elanor say down onto the sweet smelling grass. This moment would be in her childhood memories, What sweet memories she would have. She did wish she could have spent eternity there, She heard Rosie calling her. As got to her feet and ran to meet her. She had a picture of the peaceful picture in her memories. |
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| Author: | Fíriel_18190 [ June 30th, 2006, 3:01 pm ] |
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what a beautiful description. I could really imagine it all. Good job.
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| Author: | lady_E [ July 1st, 2006, 2:58 am ] |
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Thanks, wow that fanfiction only took me a few seconds
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