aww, it's great. I really like it! it's like... something I could have written myself to my ex (if he was still my boyfriend, of course). You're really talented!
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| Author: | Arya Undomiel [ July 1st, 2006, 1:19 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Light in Your Eyes ~ A Short Poem ~ Please Read! |
There is a light in your eyes. I see it when you laugh, When you smile, your eyes twinkle. It is like a candle in the night, A million fireflies, The star-strewn sky. I know that you are happy When I see The light in your eyes. |
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| Author: | Guest [ July 2nd, 2006, 7:16 pm ] |
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aww, it's great. I really like it! it's like... something I could have written myself to my ex (if he was still my boyfriend, of course). You're really talented!
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| Author: | Arya Undomiel [ July 2nd, 2006, 9:26 pm ] |
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^Thanks! I really like writing. . .so it was kind of easy for me.
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| Author: | Guest [ July 3rd, 2006, 6:18 pm ] |
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yeah, so do I. one of my best poem is out there somewhere - sadly no one ever reads it  I've had kind of a "low" period the last... half year tho. but I actually wrote a new poem in june, and I really liked it. so I hope I can continue writing
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| Author: | Arya Undomiel [ July 5th, 2006, 1:59 pm ] |
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^Yes, writing's fun. 
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| Author: | Guest [ July 5th, 2006, 2:02 pm ] |
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I luuuv writing. One time I wanted to be an author. Now I think I might just write as a hobby instead |
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| Author: | Undomiel111 [ July 6th, 2006, 4:19 pm ] |
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That's such nice work, Lothwen! 
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