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Post subject: 2 Wills  Posted: June 22nd, 2006, 6:50 pm |
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"2 Wills"
What would this be,
If emotion was gone?
Would I then see,
That all this is wrong.
Or would true love,
Be it's embrace?
From God above,
To the two I embrace.
Or is it something,
Lying in between?
Something ringing,
And not to be seen.
How do I know,
What His will is?
How do I know,
If my will is His?
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Post subject: Posted: June 24th, 2006, 11:48 am |
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Oh, i like that!! Especailly the last stanza.....awesoem as usual, Jax!!:)
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Post subject: Posted: June 24th, 2006, 9:51 pm |
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Wow Jax. Another awesome poem. I love the emotion behind each stanza and I love your rhyme scheme. Great work!  _________________ 
AWESOME set by the AMAZING Lembas!!!
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Post subject: Posted: June 25th, 2006, 4:30 am |
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A very beautiful poem as well.. I luv it
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Post subject: Posted: June 25th, 2006, 2:42 pm |
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Jax, as per usual, your poetry rocks! I don't think I'll come on here anymore cos it makes me feel sorry for my awful attempts at poetry. Did you sort out your book deal yet?
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Post subject: Posted: June 25th, 2006, 3:01 pm |
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HA! were both at it again!
HAve you read any of my new poems Jax?
But THis one of yours is very good!
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Post subject: Posted: June 25th, 2006, 4:55 pm |
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ya, how is ur book going, Jax? good i hope, b/c i'm dying to get it & read them!! lol  _________________
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Post subject: Posted: June 26th, 2006, 6:28 pm |
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Kestrel
I'm sorry about that.  lol But with practice if it is Gods will you CAN be a good poet.
Well, I have decided to wait on the book for a while due to some advice from a contact of mine who has experiance in publishing.
I might self publish if I get the money but I will have to pray about that a lot.
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Post subject: Posted: June 27th, 2006, 12:45 pm |
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i'll say a prayer for ya, too!! _________________
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Post subject: Posted: June 27th, 2006, 2:41 pm |
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Jax Nova wrote: Kestrel I'm sorry about that. lol But with practice if it is Gods will you CAN be a good poet. Don't be sad, you're a natural born poet, I'm not, and I'm over it! Just makes me envious! And I won't say a prayer, against my morals, but I will wish that you sort out your book, cos I can't wait to read it! _________________ <center>
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Post subject: Posted: June 27th, 2006, 5:59 pm |
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All really takes is practice, though!! I said the same thing, but Jax had to go & be a great poet, & inspire me to write. lol I actually wasn't as bad as I thought. @ least try it. *shrugs* U never know wut surprises God has in store for you. _________________
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Post subject: Posted: June 28th, 2006, 6:30 pm |
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Ditto. Who knows.
If you enjoy it I would say give it a try. But its up to you. lol
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Post subject: Posted: June 30th, 2006, 5:25 pm |
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 You'll never know, unless u try!! _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: July 4th, 2006, 12:15 pm |
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Lovely piece. The last stanza is definently the best... a nice twist of the words. Keep writing and rhyming.  _________________ $%=#?&
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Post subject: Posted: July 4th, 2006, 6:19 pm |
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Very good, as always, Jax.
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Post subject: Posted: July 5th, 2006, 1:41 pm |
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Glad you all liked it. As always.
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