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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 22nd, 2006, 2:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Fear
OK, on this poem i exaggerated (sp?) a little........but here it is.


Fear


Fear
It burns my heart,
everyday,
and every night.
It laughs,
and taunts me.
I can feel it,
hear it,
see it,
smell it,
taste it,
know it.
Fear
It haunts
my dreams
at night,
and takes
hold,
during day.
It won’t leave;
It won’t go away.
I lay awake
at night,
crying,
begging,
for it
to stop.
But it won’t
go away.
Please
let it end;
let it go
away.
Let it
haunt
someone else,
for a change.
Fear
It’s taking hold;
I can’t stop it.
I want it
to end.
But it won’t.
Fear
It’s taken control
of me.
Don’t let it,
you.
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 22nd, 2006, 2:42 pm ]
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I like it, pip!! You captured the feeling well. :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 22nd, 2006, 8:36 pm ]
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thanks. :)
Author:  lady_E [ July 23rd, 2006, 11:22 am ]
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I like that, it inspired me :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 23rd, 2006, 1:27 pm ]
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thanks! I'm glad! :)
Author:  lady_E [ July 23rd, 2006, 1:41 pm ]
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Do more poetry...you have wonderful work
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 23rd, 2006, 2:00 pm ]
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Oh, thanks. I have sum that i just havent posted......amybe i will. *shrugs* idk
Author:  lady_E [ July 23rd, 2006, 2:16 pm ]
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You really should post it. I'm sure it will be great :)
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 23rd, 2006, 2:23 pm ]
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Yes, I want to read more too, Pip. :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 23rd, 2006, 5:59 pm ]
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Aw, thanks guys!! lol :-D Alright, if u guys want. lol ;) i'll post sum more. :-P
Author:  lady_E [ July 24th, 2006, 1:38 pm ]
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ok, i'll wait for your poems here
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 24th, 2006, 1:54 pm ]
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I posted 2 in the fan fic/poetry section.........they're called Unfinished, Untitled & In His Arms check 'em out, & let me know wut u think!!! :-D
Author:  Jax Nova [ July 25th, 2006, 11:34 am ]
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Nice job pip! :)

I am going to ahve to catch up on all you have posted! lol
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 25th, 2006, 3:33 pm ]
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lol. thanks Jax :) Yes, I've been writing a lot l8ly....not really sure why. *shrugs*
Author:  ~*ArwenEvenstar*~ [ July 25th, 2006, 8:27 pm ]
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I do that sometimes. :) Unfortunatly, I think bordem and being confused inspires me to write poetry, because typically I would always get ideas during math class, my least favorite subject. ;)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 26th, 2006, 8:07 pm ]
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lol. yea, i always get them when i go 2 like dancing or singing performances....or like plays & stuff. or sumtimes movies. lol idk y. :-P
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