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Author:  Seral [ July 23rd, 2006, 6:19 am ]
Post subject:  Ice Tears.
Yes, yes... making it up off the top of my head... as you can tell. But someimes I need to do such things. For those of you that know me, you'll know that this is about December Lanaen. ^^;
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Ice tears, and a whirl-wind of pain,
A torrent of snow that seems to lay upon my heart,
Fingertips turned to frost,
Nothing remains inside...
And a Dove to remind me of the Spring..

Unwanted child,
Declined lover,
What else is left to such ice?
The lakes freeze over for winter,
And my soul remains a tidal-wave of pain...
The Dove has died.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 23rd, 2006, 6:05 pm ]
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ooh, I like that, Seral. It's so sad. It's beautiful. keep it up! :)
Author:  Seral [ July 24th, 2006, 3:57 am ]
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Thank you, very much.. though it was just off the top of my head... I'll have to sit down one of these days and work one out, properly. ^_^;;
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 24th, 2006, 11:45 am ]
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It's beautiful!!!! & yes, post more! i'd lvoe to read it!! :-D
Author:  Pandora [ July 24th, 2006, 11:59 am ]
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Ahh the coldness of Deci -pets and freeze-
Author:  Seral [ July 24th, 2006, 1:07 pm ]
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Thank you, Pip. ^_^ I shall post some more, as soon as I can. -nodnod-

-griiiiins, and pets the Pannie- Aww... he's nice really. -shifty eyes-
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 24th, 2006, 1:17 pm ]
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let me know when u do :-D
Author:  Darrell [ July 24th, 2006, 4:09 pm ]
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w00t Seral, another testiment to your skill as a writer, I wish I could come up with something like that off the top of my head. I've written one poem, mostly off the top of my head, but other than that, nothing. [To see said poem, look back through the old posts in this section]
Author:  Seral [ July 24th, 2006, 4:45 pm ]
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I will do, Pip. ^_^ Thankies, once again.

Nuuu, your poem rocked, Darrell. -le nodnod- Remember you asked me to read it before you put it up?
I enjoyed that one.. and I thought my one was a bit too short, and a bit too... lacking description.. >.>
Author:  Dea [ July 29th, 2006, 4:13 pm ]
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Seral--I Really loved your Poem, we can think what we want from it, because there's no big description....I like theese kind of poems:)
Author:  Guest [ July 29th, 2006, 6:02 pm ]
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its kool!! :)
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ July 29th, 2006, 8:04 pm ]
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^I agree w/ all!! :)
Author:  Seral [ August 1st, 2006, 8:56 am ]
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Aw, thanks guys... -throws confetti- I usually prefer writing with more description, but you're right; sometimes when its left to the imagination, and its just emotions that are expressed, it can be easier to identify with. ^^;;
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