Ok, so i havent finished this one......I wrote it like a month ago, & i wanted to write more....but nothing would cum to me.
I'm not really sure where to go w/ it from here.... any suggestions on wut 2 write about after these 3 stanzas is appreciated!!! 
Tell me wut u think...
On the outside
everything seemed fine.
Of all the pain and confusion,
I showed no sign.
Everyone believed the lie
that life was simple for me.
They didn’t even take the time
to look for themselves and see.
It was then that I met him.
He seemed to understand
all that confusion, and all that pain;
that my life was not so grand.
