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Post subject: A few recent poems  Posted: July 29th, 2006, 12:15 am |
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Just push past my barrier why don't you?
Make me starve in your insanity,
Selfishness-your insanity,
Tear drops leaking from my eyelids,
Every drop,
A drop of pain leaking flames,
Devoworing stillness,
Nothing seems alive,
Someone save me from your bittersweet insanity,
Cold quenching blood runs through your viens,
Through them pain,
Someone save you from your bittersweet insanity.
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Take me away with you,
Hide me,
Love me,
Break my bounds,
Which keep me here,
In this dark casim,
Save me from my bitterness,
This darkness which clouds my mind,
Like a vampire sucking my blood away,
Im dryed up,
Take me away with you,
Save me.
Id like comments and suggestions for both them, thanks.
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Post subject: Posted: July 29th, 2006, 8:25 pm |
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wow, I luv those. Especially the 2nd one!! it's so awesome!! I luv them!! They're really good. keep writing!!  _________________ 
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Post subject: Posted: July 30th, 2006, 7:13 pm |
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Thank you, and ill deffinatley write more.
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Post subject: Posted: July 30th, 2006, 7:30 pm |
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Keep it up! Those were really good!
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Post subject: Posted: July 31st, 2006, 2:28 pm |
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thanks gollum--I appreaciate it. What inspired me to write them was the other day a friend of mine snapped at me for no reason so, thats what inspired them and the phantom of the opera did to of course. 
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Post subject: Posted: July 31st, 2006, 7:04 pm |
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I luv 'em. they rock _________________
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