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					 Post subject: In Love  Posted: July 6th, 2006, 10:04 am   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 12 July 2005 Posts: 8885
  
			
					 
			
				 
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						 This is a poem I thought of just overnight. Only looked at it briefly for mistakes so it may not be perfect but here it goes:
 
 In Love
 Heart pounding fiercely in chest
 Echoing in the far distance
 Blood rushing through body
 Like a thick red surging current
 
 And as lights flicker on and off
 Nerves wane and wax like the moon
 Courage comes and goes as all
 Around spin and whirl in space
 
 Eyes glued onto the ground
 Unable to rise, until at last
 With the effort of lifting the world
 Eyes soars to witness the sight
 
 Her body perfect and elegant 
 Yet so fragile like a statue of glass
 Her tender skin glistening in light
 That radiates and shines from her
 
 Every movement of her are as
 Graceful as those of a dancer
 Roses and blossoms fall in grace
 As her lovely fragence fills the air
 
 Her eyes, pure as pearls and 
 Clear as water, sparkle like stars
 Rosy lips curl, forming a smile
 Of not joy but simple pleasure
 
 The very sight of her beauty
 Stirs the coals of amour 
 That has since laid in my
 heart, dormant for years
 
 My heart erupts into an inferno
 A burst of fiery passion and love
 Sheer bliss rushed through body
 Igniting my senses with pleasure
 
 As I steadily approach her
 My steps announce my desire
 My heart leaps about in joy
 Invigorated by the radiating love
 
 Her beauty draws closer
 My hunger becomes a surge
 Surge of lust overwhelming
 Me, drowning out all else
 
 Her body is ever so near
 Hearts beating so much faster
 Her hot breath fueling my desire
 Sending my mind into eternal bliss
 
 First fingers entwin then hands
 Her warm flesh exciting my senses
 Her crimson lips mingle wtih mine
 And together we stood in locked embrace 
					
						_________________   I was cured all right. 
					
  
						
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 6th, 2006, 3:41 pm   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 14 June 2006 Posts: 47 Location: Legends Place
  
			
					 
			
				 
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						 Wow! That one is really good, I got the shivers when I read it! 
					
						 _________________ "Hello" is the beginning of "Good-bye"
 
 98% of teens say "I love you" and don't mean it. If you are one of the 2% that do mean it put this on your signature 
					
  
						
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 6th, 2006, 4:05 pm   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 30 December 2005 Posts: 2901
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						I got shivers as well!!  I really like it.     
					
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  "Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home."
					
  
						
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 13th, 2006, 2:23 pm   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 10 June 2005 Posts: 1871 Location: Minas Tirith Country:  
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						 Bravo! 
					
						_________________  Faith isn't the ability to believe long and far into the misty future.      It's  simply taking God at His Word and taking the next step Joni Erickson Tada 
					
  
						
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 14th, 2006, 12:15 am   | 
				 
				 
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						 Wonderful!  I don't know what it is, but I think there's a rhythm and a beat to it that is really good.  It's kind of mezmerising.  lol, I'm weird; I know. 
					
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 14th, 2006, 12:30 pm   | 
				 
				 
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						 Its beuatiful Frost. Very deep...I like it. 
					
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 15th, 2006, 4:19 pm   | 
				 
				 
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						 Wonderfully done!!! 
					
						 _________________ You must do the thing you think you can not do.
 
 Jesus is my bestfriend.
 
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 16th, 2006, 5:29 am   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 15 March 2006 Posts: 4107 Location: The Square! LOL!
  
			
					 
			
				 
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						 That is amazing! 
					
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I saw you look away Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing? (I saw you run) I saw you run away Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing? 
					
  
						
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					 Post subject:   Posted: July 16th, 2006, 2:47 pm   | 
				 
				 
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					 Joined: 05 July 2006 Posts: 18 Location: The Old Navy of Gondor
  
			
					 
			
				 
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						 Very cool!  I like the part where you say "Like a statue of glass" you get such a clear picture of what you're describing there. 
					
						 _________________ Those who are doomed to fall should not go sight seeing on Orthanc... 
					
  
						
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					 Post subject: Re: In Love  Posted: September 13th, 2025, 12:03 pm   | 
				 
				 
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