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 Post subject: A song(believe it or not)
PostPosted: October 26th, 2006, 9:53 pm 
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I am not a poet or a writer, but eveyonce in a great(great) while, I will get an idea, and sit down and write a poem or a aong. this is a song that I wrote last night. It has a tune, but its not like I can show it to you. ;) BTW, writing is NOT my calling, so it isnt very good (and I can admit that)

I havnt decided on a name for sure. But for now I am calling it "or"

Or
[Verse]
Do you ever think about me?
Or what i'm thinking now?
Or wonder if I'm happy, with how my liffe turned out?
Do you ever wonder if I miss you
and how things used to be?
Or are you content to foget me?

Does it ease your pain, not to think about us?
Or try to forget, all that life has taught us?
Words can not describe, how In long for your touch.
just for one moment

[Chorus]
I miss you, I need you, what else can I say?
Your missing from my life, and I cant take another day.
Without you here beside me, to hold me and to hide me.
I cant Live without you.

[Verse 2]
Do you cry at night, when I come to your mind?
Or hate my memory?
Or wonder why We're so blind?
To life, to love, to happiness, to beauty, and to light.
Do you wonder how to live again

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Why this pain and lonliness, when loves waiting here?
With you here beside me there'd be nothing that I fear.
I miss you, I need you, what else can I say?
Exept that I cant live, without.... you.

I Told you not very good.

If I ever where to record it, I would record it with out music(cant remember what they call that.... there is a name for it.) but I prolly will never get around to recording it :)

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PostPosted: October 27th, 2006, 7:41 am 
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It fots a song called "Better tahn me" by Hinder! I tyried it out in my intencce boredom!

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I saw you look away
Is what you've seen too much to take, or are you blind and seeing nothing?
(I saw you run) I saw you run away
Is what I've done too much to take or are you scared of being nothing?


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PostPosted: October 27th, 2006, 7:50 pm 
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lol oh. It took me a second to figure out what you meant... lol

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PostPosted: October 28th, 2006, 11:18 am 
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God, such bad tyes:

I meant

"It fits the song......by HINDER, I tried it out in my intence boredom!

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PostPosted: October 29th, 2006, 11:07 pm 
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lol I knew what you meant

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PostPosted: November 1st, 2006, 11:04 pm 
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I went and listened to the song, but i couldnt put my lyrics in it... I guess its because i have my own tune for it...

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