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Author: | Alanna [ August 11th, 2011, 9:03 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
*double posts* I finished two drawings. here's Eowyn. I don't think it's as good as I imagined it would turn out to be. I know I need to lighten up the outline of her face. her hair didn't come out right at all... I'm terrible with long hair! ![]() and here's Frodo. (edit: why is it so big? I went down to 400x400 on photobucket and it's not changing anything! sorry everyone!) ![]() ![]() next I'm going to do Legolas. I *think*. I've tried before and it didn't, um, work out. hopefully the next attempt will. ![]() |
Author: | Alanna [ August 22nd, 2011, 1:39 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
...and I finished Galadriel. there's something wrong with my proportions, I think. and I am doing Legolas, I'm just not done yet. any suggestions on how to fix the lady of Lothlorien? ![]() |
Author: | Erucenindë [ August 22nd, 2011, 6:28 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
You have really good drawings. ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Nurrantiel Mashiara [ August 22nd, 2011, 11:17 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
I think for Galadriel, the nose and mouth are just slightly too big. A good rule of thumb for mouths is that the corners are usually in line with the eye's pupils. They're really good drawings though! Excellent shading! |
Author: | Alanna [ September 3rd, 2011, 1:09 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
thanks Nurr & Eru! @ Eru, I know... I haven't seemed to work out a good way to draw realistic hair yet. it's definitely improved from my first attempts, but it doesn't look like you could touch it. ![]() @ Nurr, thanks for the pointer on the alignment. tomorrow I'll try erasing a bit and adjusting. it should help. thanks guys! |
Author: | Aerliniel Baggins [ November 25th, 2011, 6:19 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Constructive Criticism? (Alanna's drawings) |
*screams* Alanna. Those. Are. Amazing. ![]() |
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