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Post subject: Posted: May 6th, 2006, 7:10 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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Okay, several people have told me that I'm plagerizing(sp?) Pirates of the Caribbean. Could you tell me if I am or not? XD
Jack Davy was a pirate captain. 6 years ago, a rival pirate ship attacked Jack's ship and stole it. Now, the pirates that stole Jack's ship (the Seahawk) attacked Spainish Town, the capital of Jamaica, and kidnapped the captain of the navy. His fiance, Morgan, the daughter of a now retired military official, joins Jack's ship to rescue him, but falls in love with Jack instead and leaves Spainish Town with him.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2006, 7:21 am |
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I don't think so, but that's just my opinion.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2006, 7:06 pm |
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Joined: 04 June 2005 Posts: 5471
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I don't think you're plagerizing.
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2006, 10:28 pm |
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Joined: 10 September 2005 Posts: 5839 Location: P3X-774, Rohan, Moya, or my TARDIS
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It has similarities, but it is not plagarizing!
I love to write! Can I join!
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Post subject: Posted: May 7th, 2006, 11:39 pm |
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Joined: 05 June 2005 Posts: 794 Location: Greenwood the Great Country:
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I don't think your plagarizing, I like it.
I'm done with the plot. Now on to the Character profiles I've almost got the main character done.
The end is very emotional I give ya'll a sniplit as soon as one of my friends finishes reading it. 
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Post subject: Posted: May 8th, 2006, 9:59 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 2141 Location: Davenport, Iowa
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Okay, writing my book, Wintersong, has been going along really well. I want to share with a little snippet.
The names are kinda weird, so be warned. I really like them though.
Anywyn 1, 417
Natayen goes off today.
Winter lovingly traced Natayen's name with her finger, speaking that first line out loud in barely more then a whisper.
I wish he didn't have to. Then we could both stay here, safe and happy. No such luck. My uncle insists on sending Natayen off on a journey that is useless. I believe he just wants to sperate us. He has forgotten about my stuborness, however. I'm going to join Natayen and the others later. Ielan longs to come as well. I have told her she can come, but she must find help from Amaril first. She is a friend as well, so I tried to discourage her from coming. But Ielan's mind is set. Which is why I told her to find Amaril, a friend of mine who is visiting. She is the duchess of Merovia.
Ah, yes, Amaril. She would definitely help. Winter smiled as she recalled Ielan, her maid with brown hair and brown eyes, and Amaril, with her red hair and hazel eyes.
These dragons have never caused trouble. Indeed, this particular clan-they call themselves the Rainbow Clan-are peaceful, and have even helped us at times. Their residence is in the Jancue Mountains, south of here.
The Jancue Mountains. The name whispered in her head softly. It was etched on her mind, the name of a forbidden place.
How long had it been since that journey when she could have sworn she saw her mother? Why did her uncle never allow her to go to the mountains? Whenver they went on progress, they never went near those mountains.
Winter thought about that say, whe she thought she'd seen her mother standing between two trees, on her only other journey to the mountains.
Suppose her mother was still alive?
Certain things had always seemed rather sketchy about her mother's death-but then again, it had been the same for the story of her father's end.
No, that was a hope that couldn't come ture. Winter had to face it. Her parents were dead. There were graves to show that.
Idly twirling a lock of hair around her finger, Winter flipped back to a different date-the day she thought she'd seen her mother.
Fulcara 17, 404
I thought I saw my mother today. I may be losing my mind,but I am almost certain I saw her-the mother whose face I know only from portraits. My mother, wither her wavy brown hair and green eyes. The mother I never knew. I thought I saw her standing by the road as we traveled through the small village of Frozen Leaf. I idly turned my head to the side and there she was, standing between the trees that lined the path, a sad look in her eyes, the wind blowing her hair across her face. I was almost certain she was my mother, Lalena, former Queen of Lamereay. But what if it wasn't her? It could have been any village maid. Anyways, I've seen my mother's final resting place, her grave here at the castle. I suppose I am hallucinating, or imagining things, and that is not a comforting thought.
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Post subject: Posted: May 8th, 2006, 11:26 pm |
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I like it, Ellethwen! Sounds like it's a fantasy, right?
I think it's be awesome if you join, Nauriel Rochnur!
I'm working on a school assignment, the first part of a novel. I've gotta get busy on it. lol
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Post subject: Posted: May 9th, 2006, 4:01 pm |
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Joined: 25 October 2005 Posts: 1986 Location: USA, Middle Earth, LOST, Elizabethtown, anywhere I want
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It feels like it's been a while since i've been here.
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Post subject: Posted: May 9th, 2006, 6:06 pm |
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Joined: 03 June 2005 Posts: 2141 Location: Davenport, Iowa
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Yep, it's a fantasy.
I'm working my way through chapter 6, although it's somewhat slow now.
That little bit is from chapter 3.
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Post subject: Posted: May 13th, 2006, 1:35 pm |
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Joined: 10 December 2005 Posts: 1317 Location: Watching you. ALL THE TIME.
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That sounds really really good Ellethwen!
I just started making character profiles for the characters in my pirate story. The plot has changed quite a bit... *laughs*
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Post subject: Posted: May 14th, 2006, 5:37 am |
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Can I join? I love to write! 
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Post subject: Posted: May 14th, 2006, 4:06 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2006, 11:11 am |
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I love writing, too!! Can I join??
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2006, 11:33 am |
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2006, 2:07 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: May 15th, 2006, 8:14 pm |
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Joined: 10 September 2005 Posts: 5839 Location: P3X-774, Rohan, Moya, or my TARDIS
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I'm still writing, though bearly. I need to write more! But I can't decide what to name my character. I started out with Nollan, but I want somthing a bit more powerful, and a touch flashy. I'm searching through arab names (I love them so much!) but so far I havn't had much luck. I just can;t choose the right name. Graaaa
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