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Post subject: Posted: September 28th, 2007, 11:50 pm |
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lol....right.  That's awesome.
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2007, 10:41 am |
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Heart heavy with dread, Murtagh walked down the hallway toward Galbatroix's quarters. "Why am I being called here?" He wondered to himself. "He's never taken notice of me before." He paused at the large oak door. Glad to see his hand wasn't shaking, he rapped a few times then pushed the door open to a gruff, "Come."
Murtagh stepped into the room, and looked about him in amazement. One would think the king of a country would live in splendor, yet Galbatroix had simple, stark furnishings. In the center of the room sat the man himself, delicious smelling food on the table before him. Murtagh sat in response to a gesture, and reached for some food.
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What's really nice about this is that we can have normal conversations while we're writing the story, unlike rps. It's pretty good. 
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2007, 6:58 pm |
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Joined: 12 December 2006 Posts: 1977 Location: Soul Society
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What are we doing?
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Post subject: Posted: September 29th, 2007, 6:59 pm |
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Joined: 27 February 2006 Posts: 11433 Location: My Imagination Country:
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Eruraina Aniarure wrote: writing a story about Murtagh, starting from where he finds out Galby is bad, to the point where he saves Eragon and Arya from Gil'ead(I'm pretty sure that's the right place!)
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Post subject: Posted: September 30th, 2007, 1:33 am |
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((i hope this is okay))
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As Murtagh reached for the food, a quick flash of silver came out from the shadows and came flying towards Murtagh's hand. It hit the table, barely missing his fingers, and as Murtagh got a closer look at it he noticed it was the blade of the sword. Then, he looked up and out from the shadows, came the evil war lord, Galbatroix.
Galbatroix was wearing a plain black robe, covering a red undershirt and black pants. His hand was gripped tightly around the swords hilt and as his face was revealed from the shadows, he grinned a evil, merciless, yet childish grin.
"Aww, Murtagh, son of Morzan, my friend. I invite you humbly into my household, and already, even before your host greets you, you try to steal from me."
Galbatoriox pulled the sword out of the table and began pacing around as he spoke these words, coming up behind Murtagh and whispering the word steal intp his ear, hissing like an snake. Galbatoriox stepped back and walked up and took a seat at his "throne", sheathing his sword at his side and still grinning, looking Murtagh in the eyes as he turned to face him.
"You are perfect." He said finally.
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How was that?
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