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Post subject: What the powerful thought of Frodo.... short poem Posted: December 12th, 2008, 9:30 pm |
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Joined: 10 April 2008 Posts: 86 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.....
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Well, I'm Alasse a new ringer here. I love to write so i thought i'd chedk it out here. I just had an idea right now. what would the elves and wizards and rest of the Earth think when they saw/heard of Frodo? Just the fact that it was him who was chosen to determine so much, would shock them, don;t ya think? soo.. i wrote this. exactly right now. on the spot. please please let me know what u think.
How humbling, the only chance Middle Earth has anymore,
to keep peace in this life, but to win in the war,
we wait upon the youngest, most foolish, least wise,
to end this chapter, and have a new time arise.
The middle earth that was started by the most powerful of them all,
will now have it's fate decided by one so small.
All determined eyes, frown down upon the chosen one,
the ringbearer, the decider, Frodo, Drogo's son.
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Post subject: Posted: December 14th, 2008, 11:37 am |
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Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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Very good.  I like it, and yeah... i agree. I bet the elves and even the men didn't much like the idea of a hobit (of all races) being the one to carry the ring. But of cours gandalf knew what he was doing.
Nice read. 
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Post subject: Posted: December 15th, 2008, 6:44 pm |
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Joined: 10 April 2008 Posts: 86 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.....
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thanks, writing is a passion of mine
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Post subject: Posted: January 8th, 2009, 8:58 pm |
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Joined: 21 September 2008 Posts: 156 Location: Wandering, lost in my secret realm of fiction & fantasy (who stole my map??)
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very good; i enjoy it extremely. Writing is a passion of mine also, and while i rarely try my hand at poetry, i would like to write something like this.
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Post subject: Posted: January 20th, 2009, 10:06 pm |
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Joined: 10 April 2008 Posts: 86 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.....
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thanks.. means alot.  lol i think u should try writing poetry. i am not really a poet (as u can probaly tell  ) i just thought i shouljd try.lol. u should try writing poetry, Gladriel, us word pl r good at impromptu! writing is great, isn;t it?

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