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Post subject: Words (G)  Posted: December 27th, 2006, 3:55 pm |
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Joined: 08 January 2006
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jsut kinda ends, i know....i couldnt think of ne thing else after that...lol let me know wut u think so far. 
A blank page
Stares at me.
Nothing to write,
Yet so much to say.
No word to express,
Yet so much to feel.
But still the page is blank;
Still, no words are there.
And then,
It comes.
Like a flood in a drought,
Food in a famine,
Calm amidst fears,
Love amidst loneliness,
it comes.
Words,
sweet words.
Words to express
my heart.
Words to write down
my very soul
on paper.
What I will do with it,
once finished,
I know not.
Perhaps
I will rip them.
Perhaps
I will keep them.
Perhaps
I will share them.
Perhaps,
Even,
I will burn them.
I know not.
But it doesn’t matter.
For now,
it doesn’t matter.
So long as they’re there,
and not inside,
torturing;
burning
my soul.
So long as
they don’t
have to hurt me
Anymore. _________________ 
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 28th, 2006, 1:06 am |
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I love it, Pip!! I love all of the comparisions you made throughout it. And I know the feeling, when the words finally hit you and you can't get them out fast enough.
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Post subject: Posted: December 28th, 2006, 1:06 pm |
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lol. yup, that's basically it! nothing nothing nothing whamo! 2 many words & i cant write fast enough! lol  Thanks!  _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: December 28th, 2006, 2:36 pm |
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Joined: 04 November 2005
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nice job. You got good emotion in it.
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Post subject: Posted: January 4th, 2007, 9:59 pm |
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thanks.....i've had trouble writing, lately...idk y....i think it's funny how the only things i can write about sumtimes, is how i cant write! lol _________________
"Great art is as irrational as great music. It is mad with its own loveliness."
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Post subject: Posted: January 5th, 2007, 2:27 pm |
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Yeah, I know that feeling. I actually wrote a song about not being able to write a song not to long ago. lol
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Post subject: Posted: January 5th, 2007, 5:56 pm |
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lol. those r the best! lol _________________
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Post subject: Posted: January 6th, 2007, 1:50 pm |
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lol
But I guess it's good anyway to at least wite something.
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Post subject: Posted: January 7th, 2007, 3:28 pm |
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yha,i def. agree....still having trouble writing l8ly though...idk y.....it's like the flow's cut off or sumthing.....nothing cums...weird....
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