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Author: | Guest [ October 28th, 2006, 1:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | TrueNarnian's Poem Set (Lots of Poems) |
Total Poems: 16 Bold Italic=Normal Poems Colored=Special/Award Winning/Best Poems <center>Poem Awards I have won- 2nd Place: ![]() -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Golden leaves transparent and green. Blue waterfalls, heathery downs. Green rolling Hills, deep blue lake. Signs of spring, Winter begone, summer awake. River unfrozen, cherry-white trees, the Joy of Spring, unceased. ----------------------- Last Breath, egde of Battle, despair in the air, hope lost everywhere. Victory gone, out of reach, we've been defeated, so now's our retreat. The cry of Battle, worried faces, harsh language, the signs of Battle. ------------------------ Hope renewed, hope returned all fixed and new, worrieness gone. Shouts of joy, signs of Peace, fruitful land, too happy to speak. Wholesome fruit, tears to my eyes, this is the land I've been looking for all my Life. --------------------- Whispering night, loud winds, silent forest, what lies within? Creatures, beasts and gods, wood-women and well-women, Dryads and Naiads. Hooting owls, nature awakes, these are the sounds, of a undisturbed Wood. -------------------- You gave your life up for me, for everyone in this sinful world.. Dear Lord. Teach me your ways, help me to find you, lead me from the darkness.. redeem me. I'll be a born again Christian, a defender against all evil, and a Warrior for you. Help me put on the armor of Salvation... and to grow and know you till the end of my days... ---------------------- Death in eyes, Icy cold stare.. Stainless blood unreasoned love. Sorrowful life, painful goings, dont look at me, because I'll be going. Gnawed teeth, black skin, burning fire, help me and I'll live. Meanful glares, piercing looks, hatred fills the air with your mere look... ----------------------- Just a thought, Unbelieveable it may seem. Let it go, In you I will believe. Anticipate it, hold it, never let go. Maybe it will come back, At the dawn of spring. Eventually this thought will be retrieved. Just another thought, Entrust it, I will, Never let it go. Show your courage, Enlist your thought; make it happen. Never give up...just never let go. ------------------------- Heart of Stone, eyes at rest, take the sword and go to your Quest. Beating heart, sweat on skin, the cry of battle is near at hand. Sharpen your sword, bend the bow, harness your horse, it's time to go. Don't despair, strike the last blow, all depends upon You. ---------------------------------------------------- Every moment I breath someone is gasping for air. Every time I eat, someone is dieing of starvation. Whever I put shoes on my bare-feet, someone is freezing bare-footed. Whenever I laugh and think, someone is writhing in pain. And every time I go to sleep, and had a wonderful day with no harms, someone is being thankful to God for all he hath given them, even if they are at Death's doors. ------------------- Melt the Snow clear it away winter be gone, spring awake! Primroses, lilacs and roses I see. Tree's, grass, it's all coming back to me. Rustling leaves, all golden and green showers of birds emerge from the tree's. Winter has gone, this is Spring, open your eyes, behold the sight. It cannot replace the feeling it gives me. ---------------------------- Im working hard, no harms flow around me. All content, with peace and joy. Until it struck me, like a tidal wave, she is gone, no more to stay. Dripping blood surrounds her head, hit harshly, a common mistake. Steam fills my face, tears well in my eyes, she is really gone, no more to stay. Angry, sad all at once, I realize now, I've lost a loved one. Up in my room, the darkness concealing me, I write this poem for her, so she shall stay with me. One thing I know, and something I hoped, that this was not her real home, but up and above. ------------------------------------------ Better than spring, better than summer, and most of all, it is better than winter. The perfect weather, the happiest time of year, sadness all gone from everyone this year. Thanksgiving, Halloween, decorative holidays...my what a sight. I wish...that it will say forever. Just Autumn, just Fall, just here forever. ------------------------------ Isn't it great to realize that your alive? Soaring and flying up in the sky. Always a exciting moment, the next chapter better than the last. What if life was not so great? An empty void of nothingness? How dreadful that would be. How would you handle it? With Courage? Hope? Or foolishness and wrath? Choose the path you want to take. The path that you can't turn back on. Be wise, use your wisdom, there's no turning back...no, there is no exit. ---------------------------------- I am healed, healed from all wounds. The pain has passed, is out of my bones. Here I sit, in this house, so lonely..cold, no one to comfort me. Not Until I saw him on the wall, did my hope falter back to me. A lordly man he seemed, but what am I? A woman in his dreams? I longed to be with him, to speak, laugh, and be comforted at last. Ah! at last, I have found what I have been looking for all this time without knowing it; a comforter, a healer, a man of power to be ...Mine --------------------------------------- Fierce warrior that he is. Proud, stubborn and strong. Has skill with the bow, and the steel blade, can master anything in his way. What destiny lies within? Hidden in his troubled mind. Unbreathing soul that is mine. Son of the Shadows, a black- crowded mind, it's not his fault, but mine. It shouldn't have turned out this way! Sweet sorrow, it's just a black void. Darkness crept over him, because of his master, swore an oath that cannot be taken back. In the end he will choose, to fight back and choose his own fate, or keep his dark oath that he swore to control him evermore. At the end the light shall prevail, he shall be his old gentle self again. With his head held high, no darkness will control him again! The dark oath of his master will be taken back. To control him no more. Only his Destiny will guide him, a destiny that shall choose his fate. ----------------------------------------------- Bitter frost kills the night. A stinging pain out of sight. Sighing, screaming, bleeding in pain, oh help me from this pain. Its like a cold dagger, killing my skin, you dont understand the pain. Pain thats lighting, it cannot be stopped, just cry till it stops. Tears like steam roll down my cheeks. I cant take it anymore...will anyone help me? Killing. Biting. Glaring. Snagging. Flaring. Snarling. Whipping. Hissing. Harassing. Save me from this Pain. |
Author: | Guest [ October 29th, 2006, 7:09 pm ] |
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A new poem is up. ^^ |
Author: | Star Gazer [ October 29th, 2006, 10:25 pm ] |
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WOW TN! Your great! I could never write so well! ![]() |
Author: | Guest [ October 29th, 2006, 10:27 pm ] |
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lol. alright. thanks SG! ![]() |
Author: | Sam the Brave [ October 29th, 2006, 10:33 pm ] |
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I agree with SG... I could never write anything like that. brillint job. |
Author: | Caunion cyn Britannia [ October 29th, 2006, 10:48 pm ] |
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Nice poems, TN! Really good word usage and imagery! I like them all. ![]() |
Author: | Guest [ October 30th, 2006, 2:25 pm ] |
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awww..thanks you guys! ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Lady Elenriel [ October 31st, 2006, 10:38 pm ] |
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Your writing is amazing TN! I love the imagery you use-their is just so much emotion in your pieces-I love it! You choose your words perfectly! I love all of your poems! Great job and keep up the great work! ![]() |
Author: | Linwe Culnamo [ October 31st, 2006, 11:00 pm ] |
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wow...thats all i can say right now. they're absolutely amazing! i love the imagery and the references to God. very nice and touching. |
Author: | Guest [ November 1st, 2006, 5:12 pm ] |
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thanks, both of ya's. ![]() |
Author: | Guest [ November 4th, 2006, 4:14 pm ] |
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I posted a new poem up ^^ |
Author: | Guest [ November 9th, 2006, 8:17 pm ] |
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*bump* dont want my thread to die ![]() |
Author: | TheSwordofNankar [ November 9th, 2006, 9:17 pm ] |
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great stuff ![]() other then that, woohoo! |
Author: | Guest [ November 9th, 2006, 9:50 pm ] |
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why take away naming objects of nature? |
Author: | Guest [ November 21st, 2006, 9:02 pm ] |
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more poems added ^^ |
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