Short and sweet.
I like short alot of the times. A ver interesting subject and in so few words it reaches very deep! And that's a good thing in my book.
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| Author: | Witch_King_of_Angmar [ December 15th, 2006, 11:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | "Longing for Jerusalem" [G] |
Our greatest sire, Lost in the mire Jerusalem's king, If there is such a thing He's gone away, Never to stay Our liege to heaven, Has been given And Christ's city hallowed, Lays under dark shadow |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ December 18th, 2006, 3:22 pm ] |
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Short and sweet. I like short alot of the times. A ver interesting subject and in so few words it reaches very deep! And that's a good thing in my book.
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| Author: | pip&leggyluvr [ January 5th, 2007, 6:22 pm ] |
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once again, i luv it....i luv how it doesnt sound forced; it's so amazing 2 me that u can rhyme like that w/out it seeming like ur trying....amazing. & as jax said, short & to the point. I luv it. |
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