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Author: | LadyOfRohan [ December 21st, 2006, 12:19 pm ] |
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Dragon! Dragon! In the fiery volcanoes of light What frightful creature waits below Scares Hobbits not to go? Sword and shields These Hobbits wield Under the Lonely Mountain Smaug sits beneath the fiery fountain Dragon! Dragon! In the fiery volcanoes of light What frightful creature below Scares Hobbits not to go? |
Author: | LadyOfRohan [ December 21st, 2006, 12:26 pm ] |
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Thanks!!! It actually was poem for school in 8th grade for a poetry folder ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Luthien of Lorien [ December 21st, 2006, 3:53 pm ] |
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Nicely done! I enjoyed how it was short and to the point, but still had enough "meat" to it, if that makes any sense. Great job! |
Author: | LadyOfRohan [ December 22nd, 2006, 12:13 pm ] |
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Hannon le!!! |
Author: | Eldarwen [ December 23rd, 2006, 3:14 am ] |
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I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing. ![]() |
Author: | LadyOfRohan [ December 23rd, 2006, 12:02 pm ] |
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Thanks!! I'm glad you guys like it |
Author: | Guest [ December 24th, 2006, 4:51 pm ] |
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Eldarwen wrote: I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing.
![]() yeah, it does kinda sound like a song the hobbits/dwarves would sing ![]() Well done mellon! ![]() |
Author: | LadyOfRohan [ December 26th, 2006, 11:30 am ] |
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Thanks!!!! ![]() |
Author: | Guest [ January 2nd, 2007, 1:19 am ] |
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i like it it was very catchy |
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