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Post subject: Dragon! Dragon! Posted: December 21st, 2006, 12:19 pm |
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Dragon! Dragon!
In the fiery volcanoes of light
What frightful creature waits below
Scares Hobbits not to go?
Sword and shields
These Hobbits wield
Under the Lonely Mountain
Smaug sits beneath the fiery fountain
Dragon! Dragon!
In the fiery volcanoes of light
What frightful creature below
Scares Hobbits not to go?
_________________  "Men rise and fall like the winter wheat, but these names will never die. Let them say I lived in the time of Achilles." "I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls." Married Finn Jones on March 24th, 2009
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Post subject: Posted: December 21st, 2006, 12:26 pm |
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Thanks!!! It actually was poem for school in 8th grade for a poetry folder  That's the only LotR related one I had though....I think 
_________________  "Men rise and fall like the winter wheat, but these names will never die. Let them say I lived in the time of Achilles." "I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls." Married Finn Jones on March 24th, 2009
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Post subject: Posted: December 21st, 2006, 3:53 pm |
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Nicely done! I enjoyed how it was short and to the point, but still had enough "meat" to it, if that makes any sense. Great job!
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Post subject: Posted: December 22nd, 2006, 12:13 pm |
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Hannon le!!!
_________________  "Men rise and fall like the winter wheat, but these names will never die. Let them say I lived in the time of Achilles." "I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls." Married Finn Jones on March 24th, 2009
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Post subject: Posted: December 23rd, 2006, 3:14 am |
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I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing. 
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Post subject: Posted: December 23rd, 2006, 12:02 pm |
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Thanks!! I'm glad you guys like it
_________________  "Men rise and fall like the winter wheat, but these names will never die. Let them say I lived in the time of Achilles." "I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls." Married Finn Jones on March 24th, 2009
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Post subject: Posted: December 24th, 2006, 4:51 pm |
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Eldarwen wrote: I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing. 
yeah, it does kinda sound like a song the hobbits/dwarves would sing
Well done mellon! 
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Post subject: Posted: December 26th, 2006, 11:30 am |
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Thanks!!!! 
_________________  "Men rise and fall like the winter wheat, but these names will never die. Let them say I lived in the time of Achilles." "I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls." Married Finn Jones on March 24th, 2009
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Post subject: Posted: January 2nd, 2007, 1:19 am |
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i like it it was very catchy
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