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Author:  Will [ January 2nd, 2007, 3:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Lost Hopes
I needed to put my feelings on paper so it became this.. Forgive me my grammar mistakes


That shiny glinstering in your green eyes,
Always make me wonder.
Is this just another lie?
Or is there truth hidden in that lovely smile?
And when your lips softly touched my hand,
I silently hoped it was more than an act,
Did you behave different from what you meant?
And the day after,
Did you even remember me?
I still felt your touch,
Did you realise this could never be?
But no matter what you feel,
This will never last.
How I wish this could be true,
I never felt like this before present or past.
I just need to forget
Author:  Guest [ January 3rd, 2007, 8:30 pm ]
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wow I loved it ;it was..... wow..*think up better adjectives*
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 4th, 2007, 9:58 pm ]
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It's very sad.....i'm guessing thsi is a personal experience, since u said u needed 2 get ur feeling on paper....i'm sorry....*hugs* i can relate, in a way, & it's very...sad.....
Author:  Guest [ January 5th, 2007, 8:11 am ]
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The reason I said I loved it because I knew it was sad I like depressing poems I know that's weird but I'm different I'm sort of a depressing person
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 5th, 2007, 6:03 pm ]
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me 2....i like sad things. lol :-P
Author:  Will [ January 5th, 2007, 7:34 pm ]
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Thanks guys.. :)

I really felt sad.. so yeah.. it's indeed a little depressing.. but the truth is, I only like sad poems..

I know.. I'm crazy :teehee:
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 5th, 2007, 8:47 pm ]
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no ur not, i generally do as well. lol :-P
Author:  Guest [ January 6th, 2007, 4:07 am ]
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yeah I love depresing poems too I wrote a few myself ;my friends said they were good but I thought a little differently
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 7th, 2007, 3:44 pm ]
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did u post 'em? i'd luv 2 read 'em.....
the way i look at it is, wut's the point of a happy poem? lol Seriosuly, though, wut locked up, secret emotion does that convey? Cheerfullness? Idk about ne1 else, but i'm nvr hesitant to let happiness show....it's the sorrowful, bitter feelings that need to be put on paper....idk, maybe it's just me, but that's the way i feel. -shrugs- :-P
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