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PostPosted: December 21st, 2006, 12:19 pm 
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Dragon! Dragon!
In the fiery volcanoes of light
What frightful creature waits below
Scares Hobbits not to go?

Sword and shields
These Hobbits wield
Under the Lonely Mountain
Smaug sits beneath the fiery fountain

Dragon! Dragon!
In the fiery volcanoes of light
What frightful creature below
Scares Hobbits not to go?

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PostPosted: December 21st, 2006, 12:26 pm 
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Thanks!!! It actually was poem for school in 8th grade for a poetry folder :goofy: That's the only LotR related one I had though....I think :blink:

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Nicely done! I enjoyed how it was short and to the point, but still had enough "meat" to it, if that makes any sense. Great job!

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Hannon le!!!

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I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing. :D

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Thanks!! I'm glad you guys like it

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PostPosted: December 24th, 2006, 4:51 pm 


Eldarwen wrote:
I think its a cacthy Ryme, id imagine it as a song the hobbits would sing. :D


yeah, it does kinda sound like a song the hobbits/dwarves would sing :)

Well done mellon! :-D


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Thanks!!!! :)

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i like it it was very catchy


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