Joined: 27 September 2005 Posts: 2895 Location: Germany
She shivers in the sun She trusts no one but everyone Her eyes are shut but she sees the same as us Her mind is free and that's enough She stays forever in her safe place Where she has no dark fears to chase She and her enemies are like fire and water When she starts, no one can stop her She's like a cloud in the sky It floats and never stops to say goodbye.
It's nothing special, but I'd love to hear your opinions.
Joined: 04 November 2005 Posts: 19521 Location: In a pudle on Naboo with dragon kind and ents and Jedi and wolves living in the Last Homely House!
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I liked it actually. I thought it was very captivating in a strane sort of way. Really has good imagry to it as well.
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I thought it was very captivating in a strane sort of way. Really has good imagry to it as well. 
