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PostPosted: November 2nd, 2006, 4:46 pm 
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"Fall Down"

When the stars are shining bright,
When the eagles over head.
And your day has turned to night,
Tears no longer stain your bed.

When the darkness passes by,
When rains fall down no more.
And you no longer wish to die,
Tears not falling to the floor.

Fall down! Fall down!
Fall down and worship Him.
Beautiful sound!
Fall down and worship Him!

If the days are long and hard,
If the sorrow strikes you deep.
And your life has then been scared,
Cast into a nightmares sleep.

If your life is sinking low,
If your mind is fading fast.
And if sorrows all you know,
Cast your cares on Him at last.

Fall down. Fall down!
To your knees to worship God.
Beautiful sound!
Fall down before your God!

When the night comes closing in,
When you breath your very last.
Break the bonds of evil sin,
Your life flies by so fast.

When this worlds at and end!
When you have no where to turn!
I'll say once, and say again,
Only for the Saviour yern!

Fall down. Fall down!
Beautiful sound!
Worship God with all your heart!
For from Him you shall not part!
Fall down. Fall down!
It's a beautiful sound,
When a sinner falls down!






(I changed a few lines)

It's in the key of E so the G F and C will be sharp. (G# F# C#)

And when I put something like this G#_F#_E You go from one to the other down the line all in the same sylable. :)

When I put (L) That means they are low notes and (H) means they are high notes. Hope I don't confuse you!




(L)
When the stars are shining bright.
E E G# G# A A G#_F#_E

(L)
When the eagles over head.
B B C# E E F#_E G#

(L)
And You've made it through the night.
E E G# G# A A G#_F#_E

(L)
Tears no longer stain your bed.
B B G# E E F#_E G#

(L)
When the darkness passes by.
E E A A A A G#_F#_E

(H) ----(L)
When the rains fall down no more.
B B B G# G#_F# A F#

(L)
And you no longer wish to die,
F# F# F# A A A A G#_F#_E

(L)
Tears not falling to the floor.
B B C# E E F# E



Chorus---

(L)
Fall down. Fall down.
E F# G# G#_E

(L)
Fall down and worship Him.
B C# E E F#_E G#

(L)
Beutiful sound.
F# F# G# G#_E

(L)
Fall down and worship Him.
B C# E E F# E



The rest is the same except the ending which is as follows.

(L)
Fall down. Fall down.
E F# G# G#_E

Beutiful sound.
F# F# G# G#_E

Worship God with all your heart
B B C# E E F#_E G#

For from Him you shall not part.
B B C# E E F# E

Fall down. Fall down.
(same tune)


It's a beutiful Sound.
E E F# F# G# G#_E

When a sinner falls down.
B B C# E F# E


Hope that explains enough fro you, lol

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PostPosted: November 2nd, 2006, 7:15 pm 
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OMG JAX!!! I luv this!! I know i say that about all of ur work, but I really do!! lol :-D It's SO good! & so true.....i especially luv the last line....

It's a beautiful sound,
When a sinner falls down!

So perfect & so true!!

Did u write it as a poem, or a song? B/c it could def. be a song....it sounds a lot like one, like verses, chorus, verses, chorus......u know wut i mean? Anyways, I really liek it!! keep it up!! :-P

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I agree with Pip. This could definately be a song. I love your work Jax. Your poems are always so beautifully expressed-and I love the message of this poem as well. Great job! :)

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Thanks. :) You know it's kind of funny some one else told me they could hear music almost when they read it on another forum. lol

And I could actually almost hear music to it when I was writing it. I actually thought of making itno a song. lol

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I love it, Jax!! And it would seriously be a wonderful song. I love it. :P :)

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Oh, u should def. write music to it!! That would be so cool!! & then sumhow, u have 2 post the audio file or sumthing, so we can all hear it!! :-D

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That would be so cool, lol. :)

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love the poem/song - absolutely brilliant!

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lol thanks. :)


Well, I have no idea how I would post the adio file... lol

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idk either.....lol i know u can put videos on photobucket now...so maybe u can put audio....*shrugs* idk

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I don't even have the slightest clue. :P

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lol. :-P my dad prob knows.....he's on a business trip :( but he'll be back firday night...maybe i can mention it 2 him saturday :)

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What would be really cool is if I could hear the both of you sing, since you both do it so much. :P That would be really cool. :)

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lol welll I will have to work on music for the words. lol

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Yes, a small detail. :P ;)

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yha, that might help....lol :-P

& actually, u prob. dont wanna hear me Arwen.....lol especially on recording.....*shrugs* u sing 2 though, don't u? y cant we hear u?? :-D

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