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 Post subject: "Longing for Jerusalem" [G]
PostPosted: December 15th, 2006, 11:30 pm 
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Our greatest sire,
Lost in the mire

Jerusalem's king,
If there is such a thing

He's gone away,
Never to stay

Our liege to heaven,
Has been given

And Christ's city hallowed,
Lays under dark shadow


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Short and sweet. :) I like short alot of the times. A ver interesting subject and in so few words it reaches very deep! And that's a good thing in my book. :)

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once again, i luv it....i luv how it doesnt sound forced; it's so amazing 2 me that u can rhyme like that w/out it seeming like ur trying....amazing. & as jax said, short & to the point. I luv it.

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