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Random Poem...Rated G....though it is a little depressing...
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Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 13th, 2007, 5:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Random Poem...Rated G....though it is a little depressing...
Randomly popped in my head. lemme know wut u think. thanks:)

So many feelings,
Yet no words to express.
So many emotions,
For words I don’t possess.

So many tears,
Yet eyes are dry.
So many fears,
Though I can’t explain why.

So much hurt;
So much pain.
So much fear;
Drives me insane.

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Author:  Witch_King_of_Angmar [ January 13th, 2007, 8:48 pm ]
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Fantastic! The rhyming is also carried out smoothly.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 13th, 2007, 9:35 pm ]
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aw, thanks. :)
Author:  Jax Nova [ January 15th, 2007, 12:17 pm ]
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Same here. Very lovely. :) Liked the rythm and rym and all of it. And I really like the picture you chose to put it on as well I think it fits really nicely.
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 15th, 2007, 1:03 pm ]
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thanks, jax....i had sum trouble finding a good pic....but once i saw that one, i was like, yup, that's perfect. lol thanks again :) i appreciate it :hug:
Author:  Lady Elenriel [ January 15th, 2007, 6:38 pm ]
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Awesome work pip. I love the rhythm and rhyme of the piece. I also love the mysterious feel it has to it as well. Great job! :-D
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 16th, 2007, 4:54 pm ]
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thanks :-D
Author:  Snowbird [ January 16th, 2007, 8:22 pm ]
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Wow! I love the way you illustrated that one!
Author:  pip&leggyluvr [ January 16th, 2007, 10:49 pm ]
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aw, thank you. i appreciate it :hug:
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