Hey, nice job. It is well written I think.
Not only that I can really relate to the subject. I wount bore anyone with the details but nice job.
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| Author: | Guest [ January 26th, 2007, 8:07 pm ] |
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no one is gonna read it..but.. This was just too much. You're killing me inside. Breaking me and twisting me, bending me deep within. What have I done to deserve this? Why has your wrath fell upon me? In your eyes I am a mere speck of dust, you hate me, hate me, kill me. Let the pain come slowly, so that I may die sorrowfully. Every drop of blood that I shed, I shall drink to burst myself. I do deserve this pain, I have seen now what I have done, do not spare any more mercy upon me...just let me get over with it. Strike me speedily with the stroke of your swift blade, exceedily accursedly, I am in pain. With no tears gliding from my eyes, only blood do I weep. I can only hear myself screaming, let me out, let me out. I am sorry, but sorry is a word that is not familiar to your ears, what is the meaning..what is the meaning of this? For you do not know... how this feels. Writhing in my own misery...this was my end, I was destined for it. This is how my life ends. I was cursed with a miserable one, not a joyful tear-less one. Woe upon woe, I cannot be remade. This is me. This is who I am. |
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| Author: | Nessmister of the Rings [ January 30th, 2007, 8:43 am ] |
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I read it! That's awesome! keep writing this stuff, for me at least. I like it! |
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| Author: | Jax Nova [ January 31st, 2007, 1:04 pm ] |
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Hey, nice job. It is well written I think. Not only that I can really relate to the subject. I wount bore anyone with the details but nice job.
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| Author: | Guest [ February 4th, 2007, 9:43 pm ] |
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haha..thanks. 
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| Author: | The Nightingale [ February 5th, 2007, 12:11 am ] |
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I like it! Great job. TrueNarnianForever! |
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| Author: | Guest [ February 20th, 2007, 6:22 pm ] |
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thanks TN.. 
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| Author: | Shadowcat [ February 20th, 2007, 7:49 pm ] |
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Hey, you guys are both TNs.
Nice poem. I could never write anything close to that even if I tried... which I dont.
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| Author: | Lady Elenriel [ February 21st, 2007, 9:36 pm ] |
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Wow, excellent use of dark imagery TN! I love the emotion in the piece-it would probably go well on a graphic of some sort. Great job!
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